slingshot40 [2007-04-14 20:12:05 +0000 UTC]
Fancy language much? It's good, but the language really isn'tr what I'm used to seeing from you. So, at first I thought you trying for a parody or something, but I guess not. Anyways, I liked it. It gets stronger as it goes. So, uh, yeah, I suck at critiques. Good job though.
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Iamthewalrus42 In reply to slingshot40 [2007-04-14 20:54:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Yeah, I've been trying to mess around with language. As I said, I've been reading way too much philosophy/theology/19th-century literature/etc. It messes with your head, lol.
Well, it was meant as a parody of bad pre-teen love poetry, but then I just kind of rolled with it.
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