Comments: 8
aht-namas [2006-06-23 02:12:32 +0000 UTC]
oh no max...im so sorry.
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Iath In reply to aht-namas [2006-06-24 19:42:39 +0000 UTC]
me to but what sucks is......
the whole thing was a miss understanding.........
I went to talk to him about it because he wouldn't be a man and just
TALK TO ME instead he had rather been a dick...... we got it figured
out and we both said out sorry's. Everything (I hope) is ok now
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Cana-chan [2006-06-23 00:02:21 +0000 UTC]
The rhyme scheme is great, and some of the imagery and unique use of cliche terms ("didn't you put on my shoe?")
I do have to give some advice though- spellcheck. I know it's tedious and boring, but it can make or break a piece of writing.
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