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Neshi-Farfarer [2016-04-07 04:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Lookin' good. Nicely done.

Technical... Nothing leaping out as "wrong" or "off", that's good. Anatomy's spot on, that's good. Other than a little sketchiness here and there, it's pretty well-done, technical-wise. Oh! Hmm. Could do with a little more shading at both armpits, just beneath the jaw, at the bust area just beneath the violin and the little that's shown of the right palm.

I don't know enough of violins, so, sorry, can't offer constructive criticism on that part. 

The expression portrayed, both on the face and the body's stance, is one of nervousness? Is it the above character's first time trying a violin? Or first time playing in front of an audience? Or... somebody... special? 

Right. Keep up the good work. 

And welcome (back?) to Deviantart.

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