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hmm im not an expert here 
hmm it's a pretty nice on it's own, yup the hair has some issues, maybe you can try make it more wavy but it's already a good job
i dont care much about the hair
but oh well it is already cool on it's own 
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This is a beautiful pic!
The only thing I can see that could maybe improve is the hairline and the neck. The hairline seems a bit close to the face, and the neck seems a bit short.
Other than that, masterful work! ^_^
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I agree pretty much with what everyone else has said.. the hair line should fade into the face, and the ear would make it more realistic, with the way the hair is laying, the ear would be showing. also the forehead isnt long enough.. the eyebrows are too high upon the head.
the flowers and the background are superb, as is the dress, I really like the idea!
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thanks so much for the critique and comment! I appreciate it loads.
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All I can say is the skin looks a tad unnatural...
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ya I guess so, not enough shadows. Will work on it! thanks for the critique!
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Ur welcome! And good luck working on it!
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the hair is not naturalistic
you can change the body, making it more surreal, abstract or
you use a reference for the hair and
don't forget the ear of the poor sleeping beauty
also donΒ΄t forget the physical laws for the hair movement
the concept is good, work on it!
good luck!
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thanks! I'll work on it
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I think what's disturbing about the hair is that it seems as if it was pasted onto the head and not as if it's growing out of it. Try to connect it more to the head, perhaps by adding small strokes that create the illusion that it's growing out of the head.
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It's a good piece, btw.
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ok, thanks! will work on it
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i think it looks great i just think the neck looks a little odd for some reason and i cannot put my finger on it. i will have to get back to you on that one. i am sorry for the inconvience
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it's alright, thanks a lot!
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I saw your request on . And I like this a lot, especially her expression.
I don't see anything amiss with her face or her hair, though her chin/neck seems to fade into shadow rather abruptly, and there's not enough neck for me to be sure if her posture is accurate or not. Also, she doesn't have an ear. Other than that, though, this is a gorgeous work, and I had to sit and study it before I could really give you a decent critique.
Very well done!
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thanks so much for your critique! will work on it
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Beautiful work, thanks so much for using my stock!
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