LightningEye [2011-01-26 22:43:19 +0000 UTC]
I love how this poem practically seduces the reader into reading the next line, and then the next, and then the next. The anticipation for where the story is going. And I enjoyed the imagery.
Is it bad if the end made me laugh out loud? Because it did!
Nice twist!
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