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Published: 2011-06-02 00:01:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1190; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 7
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"Failure" is written in my skinScrawled there in invisible ink
It sinks into my blood stream
And pumps through my body
"Failure" is ringing in my ears
Quiet enough so I can barely hear it
Yet loud enough to hear it constantly
No matter what I do
"Failure" is flashing before my eyes
Showing me everything I have tried
But have not been able to obtain
Because of everything I lacked
"Failure" has become a part of who I am
The word fills me on the inside
And surrounds me on the outside
Squeezing me tight so I can't breathe
"Failure" is what I will always be
For failure is all I know
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Comments: 28
This is absolutely beautiful and exactly what it feels like to be a "failure". I love this poem!
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Thank you so very much! And thank you for the watch!
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omg I can realte to this. look like You wrote this for me. Im a failure as well..Everyone seems to think so cuz I didnt get grades good enough to go to a good college..Just feel soo depressed..I cant even talk to my friends about it.....just crying everyday.
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No one is really a failure. I know the people who love you would tell you that this poem is nothing like you. I know how you feel, but things are never as bad as they seem. I really hope you feel better.
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I bet ur not anywhere as near a failure as i am.
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Aw, don't say that
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It's a really nice poem that makes me think a lot...Thank you for writing this!!!
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Thank you very much <3
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One week amy go wrong but another week will always come and god willing that week will be better. No one person is a failure.
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Thank you, friend
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Thank you so much, friend
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I feel the same way sometimes... it's horrible. I'm terrified to fail, and this poem seems to embody that fear perfectly. Great job, and never stop trying!
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Thank you very much. I hope you never stop trying as well. <3
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You're welcome, and no worries, I won't
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This is really good. I can really relate to this.
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Thank you so much.
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This is really good, clean and very deep.
I get the feeling, I can relate to this...
But remember no matter what you are not a failure,
life puts obstacles in our way just to get rid of the weak and show us who are the strong ones.
Show life you're strong.
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An excellent reminder. Thank you very much.
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The pleasure is all mine (:
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This is really good!
And I'm sure you're not a failure!
For if you were,
you wouldn't be this good! ;D
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Thank you very much. I really appreciate it.
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No problem~ ;D
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