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Icydoor In reply to leasel [2015-11-29 20:42:25 +0000 UTC]

She is yea XD have you read my comic (Poppy) btw? 

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leasel In reply to Icydoor [2015-12-02 09:48:00 +0000 UTC]

No, i haven't (

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Icydoor In reply to leasel [2015-12-02 16:57:29 +0000 UTC]

If you want,  you can read it here XD You don't have to tho.. it's kinda bad

isidorswande.deviantart.com/ar…

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leasel In reply to Icydoor [2015-12-02 17:52:35 +0000 UTC]

OK, I've had a look. Actually, I didn't think it was bad, I liked it.

Good panneling and drawing style. The font dosn't fit IMHO, something messy and "hand written" might look better. May be this , this or this one . But the font also have to be easy to read, so it is a tricky part.

Also, is it important for a story, that all characters are flies? At the certain point I got confused, who was who on the page. They have different eyes and it helps, but it wasn't enough for me.

Sorry, if I got carried away. Good luck with your comic book, it's a good work!

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Icydoor In reply to leasel [2015-12-02 18:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for the feedback! I will definitely think about that in the future. Glad you liked it ^^ 

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