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IcyhazardX — Underfell || Ey Boss
Published: 2017-07-26 18:23:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 548; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 0
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another Pap from "Shit, Lets Draw"Related content
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I enjoy your renditions of the character; however, I do have some criticism. First, there are a few spots where the linework is inconsistent and overlaps. Secondly, the anatomy of the skeleton is very off. The spinal cord is much thicker at the neck than the back, there is no indication between the spinal discs aside from lines, and there are spikes on the spinal discs. These and other anatomy issues are prevalent in many of your skeleton related art pieces and I highly recommend you use references and study skeleton anatomy. Third, the shading is inconsistent; shading is in all different directions, and certain places aren't shaded. Lastly, using a colors that are a different hue from the base color and more saturation than gray for shading will bring a piece to life. Using highlights that are not white will provide the same effect. Applying this critique will help you to improve your art in the future.
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God I've always loved UF pap, his costume looks cool as heck. Good work!
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