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idareyoutoforget — firefly boy

Published: 2005-09-13 17:38:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description My mouth is tainted with the tastes
of cigarettes and vodka,
and in my dazed state of mind
I think you are like a firefly,
I am drawn to your glow
and I’m not sure why.

     I want you to take my heart
     and hold it in your hands,
     Mould it into the shape of love and fairytales
     so we can live
     happy ever after.

My hand ends up entwined with yours
and our lips lock
feelings of lust and emtion
burst through me like fireworks
and I think I might explode.
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Comments: 5

withdrawncataclysm [2005-09-17 14:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Just....magical.

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Lerianna [2005-09-14 16:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. I really, really like this.

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inmyroom [2005-09-14 14:35:09 +0000 UTC]

look at that amazing preview image



-hug

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randomoo [2005-09-13 23:31:52 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!

I like the central simile of the whole poem; the firefly is a great image.

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GuyInJacket [2005-09-13 17:53:56 +0000 UTC]

I love it. Very, very, very nice verbalisations. I wish I were able to verbalise that good so I could tell you adequately how much I like it.
And i like the story it tells.

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