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Published: 2009-01-14 23:18:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 2517; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 0
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Here's a color WIP of The Comedian to show you all that I'm still not dead, but I grew tired of this drawing a bit too soon and never really did any more than fill in base colors. So tell me what to do with it, or what you'd have done to make it look good, and I'll look into it when I've got the time
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the comedian... taking the 'the' out of psychotherapist...
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That's a great caricature. You don't need to do anything to it at all IMO.
I love his gigantic hairy man arms.
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Thanks! I'll keep it then, maybe shade it
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this is so effing cool....
*bowz to ur awsum*
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Jeg skjΓΈnner ikke hvorfor de klager pΓ₯ beina. Synes det passer stilen utrolig bra! Og med disse flate farger virker det som om det er tatt ut i fra tegneserien. Noen skygger hadde nok vΓ¦rt nice da : D I allefall for Γ₯ fΓ₯ rΓΈyken til Γ₯ se mer levende ut.
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Takk! Endelig en som er enig med meg i at beina ikke trenger Γ₯ vΓ¦re tykkere
Jeg tenker Γ₯ legge pΓ₯ skygger, en dag jeg ikke er kjempelat
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HAHA, no true. you would have to make the whole thing bigger
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No I meant let's not do it because it'd be way too big
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Umm..not that I'm capable of making this cool, but I think I might add a little bit of shading on the skin - not too much or it'll just be a bit too real..umm.. Ooh! And a tip on the cigar - it needs it :/
THEN.. a background - I don't know about the context it should really be in - but an explosion would just be cool
(aaand the gun looks a bit flat, but it's not bad, soap..yeah..
Pretty wicked though
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I'm becoming more and more sure that I should shade the skin, so I'll probably do that. And what kind of tip did you think about for the cigar? I dunno about any other kind of tip than it already has
I'll see how much of an explosion I'm able to make! Thanks fro the feedback
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Go for it! And as for the cigar - a kind of orange, bordering on red glow..just to bring some focus into it..maybe?
You're welcome - any fro feedback you need
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Yes, of course I'm going to add the glow to the tip
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wundurful <3
Jeg liker den egentlig ganske godt sΓ₯nn som den er, om det er et alternativ!
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Jeg er glad du liker'n! Det er sΓ₯ klart et alternativ, og om jeg noen gang lager mer og du fortsatt liker denne best er det seff okΓ₯. Jeg tar vare pΓ₯ denne, sΓ₯ jeg alltids kan gΓ₯ tilbake
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I would have made the tip of his cigar red, and shaded his skin in. Real drama style.
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Dramatic shadows, you say? Will do!
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yah you know you did such a nice job with the inking--!
so are you gonna give it a background?
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I might give it some kind of vague background, but nothin fancy. Want the focus to be on the character
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thicken his legs and make them a little more masculine, then add some light shining on his mask
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You'd add shining to his mask but no shading to his arms and face? Hmmm.
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it would make it look less like a cartoon. if you're going for a calvin and hobbes dream sequence type of thing, be my guest, shade the skin. but definitely shine the mask. it will make it look less flat.
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Hmmm, I guess you're right, I guess I'll shine the mask and shade the skin and add some cool details. Thanks!
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