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IdhotKuncorot — Kagamine Rin
Published: 2012-01-03 02:57:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 748; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 21
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My old artwork, forRelated content
Comments: 18
I think it should have more detail to its face and it needs to be shaded better on the hair. I also believe that you should of used more colors into the picture so it is more noticable. There should be a focal point and a colored background i the picture. dkjfs fjdlkf djfkldsfjlks dfk fj fjlfkd fjdklfj fjdskl fjdlkf dkljfsl fdioofjef f djsfklsdjfkdslfjdskl fdklfjdskl fjdskfjk fdsjkfj fjdslkfjdkll ffdjsklfjd ffjdslkfjkldsfjdlk fdkllfjklf fkjfsdkl fjkdslfj fdldfjkfdsljfdkls fdjdfkls dsjkfldsjdslkaj fdskfjlsda fjdslkfjl ksdljfsklsdjdksljdfsdfjkl fdklsdj fdsklfjlk fjdksl fcjdklf fjdkf ffj ff ff ff ff ff ffff dfjskd fdlkfjd fkdljf dlfkjsf fdkfjk fdlksfj fdlskfj fdslkfj sadkfjdsl
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Yeah! Actually I really weak in shading and make a background
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just keep trying and oh try to use more motion in ur pics
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Lha yang ini bukannya dlu udah pernah di submit yank?
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Very good! I love it! Altho im gonna say a few things since you asked for critiquing on this cuz im too lazy to submit a full one... The lines and shape are very nicely done! But the eyes seem to lack the shine that most anime eyes have, so try adding a little more emotion/color to them! Also, the button in the middle should be slanted with her chest, and should be shaded. And shadows usually have many different shades to them, not just one. The further it gets from light, the darker it gets. Otherwise, the drawing was very very nicely done! Everything has the right shape and the right atonamy (spelling fail~!) (or at least it looks that way to me, im terrible at atonamy, so yeah...)! So a thumbs up from me!!!
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Yeah! Actually, I had a trouble when coloring her eyes..The colors can't be blend with either..
I was weak in shading and highlight
Yeah, Thanks for all critique!!
I would draw better...
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lol. Good luck! But again, you did do a very good job! So dont be discouraged!
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She looks so beautiful :3
Good job with her (:
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Np! Keep up the awesome work! XD
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Clean coloring, soft features, curvy lineart = Fave
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