Comments: 8
Mei-Chi [2006-09-15 05:47:12 +0000 UTC]
Pretty good, I actual enjoyed reading it. My favorite part is how you closed the first paragraph though, but thats just me, so yea.
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Idle-Eve In reply to Mei-Chi [2006-09-15 14:25:54 +0000 UTC]
My official critic thought the ending to the first paragraph was a wee bit weird. I'm a little embarassed about putting those lyrics in too, but I was listening to them. I think the song is called Waking Hour. Go check it out.
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Mei-Chi In reply to Idle-Eve [2006-09-15 21:55:09 +0000 UTC]
I don't think it's weird, considering that most people who read don't always write, so views are different.
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Idle-Eve In reply to dog283 [2006-09-15 00:31:25 +0000 UTC]
You make my heart flutter <3. Thanks for the comment and compliment! I hope to write more stories for ya'!
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dog283 In reply to Idle-Eve [2006-09-15 13:54:45 +0000 UTC]
XD
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vikifanatic [2006-09-14 12:44:22 +0000 UTC]
That's good to know then. This is pretty good! Gave me a break from reading Tuesdays with Morrie, The Alchemist, and other novels for school...
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Idle-Eve [2006-09-14 04:55:23 +0000 UTC]
Jesus. I think I need some holy intervention to help me with artistic fluidity. Don't worry, people. This deviation is only in its infant stages.
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