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ChojinRyu750 [2010-12-05 03:31:08 +0000 UTC]
saber looks stunning in her lily costume, typemoon did geat with its concept
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umbras-et-lumina [2010-11-04 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]
It's good but the feet seem awkwardly angled, suggesting she's facing/walking in a different direction than in the one she really is. I suggest making them face more in front of her. Overall, it's good.
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squanpie [2010-10-31 21:57:03 +0000 UTC]
ooooh, nice.
although, i think this is one that would benefit greatly from coloured lineart. The black looks a little stark against all those light edges.
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temporize [2010-10-21 07:39:02 +0000 UTC]
Ooh very pretty! I love how you drew the dress.
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Nuclearkoi [2010-10-20 06:46:32 +0000 UTC]
Another one! And it isn't a quick sketch!
I do like the overall lighting scheme, however I think that it could be harsher; less softness where the light meets shadow.
Also! Don't be cheap on the shadow! You totally just copied the layer and blurred some edges. That in it of itself isn't bad, but with the light source as you have it, wouldn't the shadow be longer and more stretched out?
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