Queen-iee-oh [2015-05-01 05:42:43 +0000 UTC]
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This is super dang cute! I honestly cant point out many issues because you have really grasped this adorable style.I recommend drawing your own backgrounds. (if you did, bravo, hella great )Your color palate is very sweet and pastel, except in the middle, the background is too warm. A nice lilac color palate would be lovely.Also the shading isn't too visible, have it two shades darker so it shows up better. The first drawing has most of the detail, maybe if the other two outfits had more elements and textures they would draw the eye further as well!You are doing a great job, maybe looking at some lighting and shading tutorials and you are set! Love your work, Id totally buy a commission in a heart beat.
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