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Ifus — New No World Cover

Published: 2011-06-11 21:36:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1451; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 22
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Comments: 5

CorvusRaven [2011-06-12 02:44:47 +0000 UTC]

This turned out great! It seems like it changed a lot from the initial sketch xD
I like what you did with the smoke C:

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Ifus In reply to CorvusRaven [2011-06-12 19:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I think I shall use that other sketch for another chapter title.

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Yesterlove [2011-06-11 23:16:09 +0000 UTC]

The composition of this is great! I love the colors, especially how the blue smoke creates movement throughout the picture. The only critique I can offer involves the text--the first"L" in "illustrated" is lost within his glowing marking--perhaps consider adding an outline to the font, or darkening the color of it slightly?
Perhaps I'm just being OCD about it; people will be able to infer what it says, after all But I think it would look better if you defined the word somehow.
/end critique

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Ifus In reply to Yesterlove [2011-06-12 19:28:46 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking of adding a thicker outline around the text. I might just just make the text bigger on another layer but darker and add it underneath. Any suggestions?

Thanks for the crit! It's much appreciated~

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Yesterlove In reply to Ifus [2011-06-12 23:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Both of those sound like good ideas I'd try both and see which one looks better to you ^___^

And you're very welcome!

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