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ifyoucanmakeme — Moment of Tenderness [NSFW]
Published: 2010-03-28 20:23:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 928; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 3
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Description She lays there with her hair fanned out
Pearly skin aglow beneath
Moon
Stars
And wafting curtains excitedly shushing one another

The sheets are nestled around her
Like two hands cupping her
Protecting her
Sweetness
Kindness
Innocence
But not from me

It's a shame she's sleeping
I could do so much to her
It's hard to resist my woman
Naked
Defenseless
And wearing a collar deeming her my property

Perhaps if I was more cruel of a Master
I'd shake her awake
And punish her for not greeting me
But the whispering curtains
And watching moon
Lend pity to her cause

So I slide into bed
And steal some cover
As in a half dreaming
Half waking
Mostly sleeping state
She arises and crawls seeking my warmth

I tug on her collar very lightly
Coaxing her smooth cheek against my chest
Curling covers like a cocoon around us
Then peacefully
Dreamily
The moment of tenderness
Fades into dark
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Comments: 24

ariel44 [2010-06-07 02:40:06 +0000 UTC]

aww thats very tender

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to ariel44 [2010-06-07 04:07:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm glad you like it It's probably my favorite poem on here.

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ariel44 In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-06-07 04:07:52 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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EatingMyOwnFears [2010-06-06 23:17:10 +0000 UTC]

aww a moment of tenderness between master and owned

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2010-06-07 02:29:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it I wrote it to be kind of sweet.

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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-06-07 04:47:14 +0000 UTC]

yeah

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to EatingMyOwnFears [2010-06-07 05:37:10 +0000 UTC]

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LeFantomeDeVosDesirs [2010-05-27 17:36:38 +0000 UTC]

Very romantic, intense, yet on edge, Cheri. Well done.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to LeFantomeDeVosDesirs [2010-05-27 18:00:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much. I don't mean to sound rude, but why do you call me "Cheri"? I don't mind, I'm just curious.

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LeFantomeDeVosDesirs In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-05-27 18:01:10 +0000 UTC]

Cheri, darling in French.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to LeFantomeDeVosDesirs [2010-05-27 18:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Oh, okay Thanks.

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LostInRemembrance [2010-05-18 06:24:54 +0000 UTC]

I like how this doesn't end in a sex scene. Not that there would be anything wrong with that, but this way you subtly build up the tension and give us a very romantic resolve. This is really more about love.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to LostInRemembrance [2010-05-18 06:33:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I thought was important to show the loving side of such a relationship. Especially since many people don't understand it.

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LostInRemembrance In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-05-18 06:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Exactly. I mean you have to love, or at least deeply trust, someone if you're gonna let them own your body for a while. But for most people it's just completely mad

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to LostInRemembrance [2010-05-18 14:03:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but they're just missing out

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LostInRemembrance In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-05-18 22:40:20 +0000 UTC]

they sure do

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landoflor [2010-04-08 18:00:25 +0000 UTC]

i liked that one it was romantic ^^

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to landoflor [2010-04-08 23:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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XMistressMacabreX [2010-03-30 05:45:15 +0000 UTC]

Wow .. i love this like .. so much this to me is just wonderful .. i so want a slave now v.v , heh .. guess once im done in school .. hmm seems nice tho

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to XMistressMacabreX [2010-03-30 14:08:04 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwww Sorry I made you sad! But I'm glad you liked it though I'm sure you'll have your own slave soon

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BackseatBrianna [2010-03-28 20:26:38 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, very visual. You made me want to buy a collar - its been too long.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to BackseatBrianna [2010-03-28 20:44:20 +0000 UTC]

What kind of collar are you looking for? I know a few good online places to get leather ones. Depending on what you like, of course

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BackseatBrianna In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-03-28 21:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I would only ever think of getting a leather one. Email me a list of your places, that would be great!

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to BackseatBrianna [2010-03-28 23:05:31 +0000 UTC]

Alright, after over an hour I got the whole email done. Collars are so distracting

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