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ifyoucanmakeme — To The Rack Again [NSFW]
Published: 2011-01-19 02:48:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 920; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 19
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Description He points to the dungeon door
His will unwavering and binding
She gives him one last pleading look
But his glare is blinding

She flees into the darkness
Steps like a running deer
With each marching of his feet
Inside her surges up fear

He utter not a word
When he chains her to the wall
As he strips her of her clothes
It's hard not to give in to his thrall

Once she's faithfully secured
He fetches the whips of many tails
He runs it through his fingers
Scratches it with his nails

Then he plunders it upon her flesh
Stealing every ecstatic moan
She rides waves of pleasure
Feels the pain seep to the bone

She writhes upon his binding rack
Unable to keep still
He's smiling wickedly now
Giving into the sinful thrill

With each reddening of her flesh
The stakes grow higher
Her skin burns will poisonous delight
Every cell afire

"Please Master!" she gasps
Begging only for final release
He gives one last lashing
Before the tortures cease

His cock is quick to penetrate
Her pussy so hungry and calling
She eggs him on with moans
Not in the mood for stalling

Each ramming of his length
Is a new painful bliss
She craves each clawing of his nails
As much as every kiss

Before the night is through
He'll leave her black and blue
And she will beg for more
Even after he's through
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Comments: 20

faredmllm [2011-03-30 00:23:49 +0000 UTC]

ah now i remember why i loved being on deviantart... lol this was a sizzling and wonderful reading; as usual

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to faredmllm [2011-04-02 02:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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ChristCorpse13 [2011-01-25 16:11:33 +0000 UTC]

Its a nice exercise piece. I like it, rhyming is fun sometimes for sure.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to ChristCorpse13 [2011-01-25 18:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Indeed

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ProfessorSkrewlews [2011-01-19 13:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm yet another thoroughly enticing piece

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to ProfessorSkrewlews [2011-01-20 03:04:24 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear!

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pondie [2011-01-19 06:03:12 +0000 UTC]

You're off to a good start.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to pondie [2011-01-20 03:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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MisplacedFox [2011-01-19 05:49:42 +0000 UTC]

oooohh... naughty...naughty... I love it!

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to MisplacedFox [2011-01-20 03:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Hurray!

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MisplacedFox In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2011-01-20 03:13:01 +0000 UTC]

i was naughty and envision her being me... is that wrong?

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to MisplacedFox [2011-01-20 04:22:32 +0000 UTC]

Of course not

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MisplacedFox In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2011-01-20 07:48:55 +0000 UTC]

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to MisplacedFox [2011-01-20 22:16:38 +0000 UTC]

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MisplacedFox In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2011-01-21 00:42:36 +0000 UTC]

i love him and this one

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to MisplacedFox [2011-01-21 01:23:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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Caedy [2011-01-19 02:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Ooooo >.> I like it!

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to Caedy [2011-01-19 02:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Any opinion on what I should focus on improving for next time?

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Caedy In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2011-01-19 03:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Mm...I will get back to you on that one, not coherant enough to write a critique-esque comment.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to Caedy [2011-01-19 04:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha, that's fine I await your response.

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