Comments: 20
ChristCorpse13 [2011-01-25 16:11:33 +0000 UTC]
Its a nice exercise piece. I like it, rhyming is fun sometimes for sure.
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pondie [2011-01-19 06:03:12 +0000 UTC]
You're off to a good start.
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MisplacedFox [2011-01-19 05:49:42 +0000 UTC]
oooohh... naughty...naughty... I love it!
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MisplacedFox In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2011-01-20 03:13:01 +0000 UTC]
i was naughty and envision her being me... is that wrong?
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Caedy [2011-01-19 02:52:04 +0000 UTC]
Ooooo >.> I like it!
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Caedy In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2011-01-19 03:55:32 +0000 UTC]
Mm...I will get back to you on that one, not coherant enough to write a critique-esque comment.
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