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windyautumnmoon [2011-08-12 23:11:37 +0000 UTC]

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dragondoodle [2011-08-11 19:33:31 +0000 UTC]

Me again I'm going to take you at your word that you're okay with me doing this

Let's see . . . Panel 5 would work better if he was saying "It is nice to see you people. But I think we're a little stuck here, can not even move a step." to which she replies "I think it is one of her spells" or "It is some sort of spell" either one would work

Panel 6 would be more grammatical if she said "Train him well, Azaria." (the well/good issue is hard for native speakers as well )

Panel 7 would sound better if he said "Train me for what?! To not be killed by some crazy b**** like you?!"

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Texic [2011-08-11 18:37:42 +0000 UTC]

История стремительно развивается. Молодец.

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