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ihatemonday — 'the colors of mine'

Published: 2005-10-10 05:42:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 421; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 54
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Description it was blue
when i first knew you
became pink
when we talked about love and dreams
turned into red
when we meet face to face
the color is gray
when you are not besides me
... and i will paint it black
if you really walk away from me ...

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Comments: 22

ihatemonday [2005-11-10 16:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Vyano ... it's my heart talkin' .... *hikz ..tissue pliz...

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Vyano-Xiaah [2005-11-10 15:57:38 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem. Love the frames over the heart.

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ihatemonday In reply to Vyano-Xiaah [2005-11-22 15:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Vyano ... it's my heart talkin' .... *hikz ..tissue pliz...

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ihatemonday In reply to Vyano-Xiaah [2005-11-22 14:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much Vyano ... it's my heart talkin' .... *hikz ..tissue pliz...

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ihatemonday [2005-10-17 14:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot Charm ... glad to know u like it too.

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Charmology [2005-10-17 14:09:48 +0000 UTC]

I like the look of this! nice poem and picture!

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ihatemonday In reply to Charmology [2005-11-22 15:06:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot Charm ... glad to know u like it too.

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Charmology In reply to ihatemonday [2005-11-23 11:56:15 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome!

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ihatemonday In reply to Charmology [2005-11-22 14:40:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot Charm ... glad to know u like it too.

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ihatemonday [2005-10-14 05:41:49 +0000 UTC]

...it's already edited ... how it's look now ?

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blacklaser In reply to ihatemonday [2005-11-22 14:43:21 +0000 UTC]

good job

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-11-22 15:07:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank u for the support .. i do very appreciate it

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blacklaser [2005-10-13 17:52:45 +0000 UTC]

Ok, here's a corrected verison:

it was blue
when i first knew you
became pink
when we talked about love and dreams
turned into red
when we meet face to face
the color is gray
when you are not besides me
... and i will paint it black
if you really walk away from me ...

Hope it helps

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-11-22 15:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank You very much Black .. it's really helpful for me ..
i will edit the old one with the correct version

thanks alot for wasting your time to help me... i do really appreciate it
sorry if my english is not good...

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-11-22 14:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank You very much Black .. it's really helpful for me ..
i will edit the old one with the correct version

thanks alot for wasting your time to help me... i do really appreciate it
sorry if my english is not good...

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-10-13 19:55:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank You very much Black .. it's really helpful for me ..
i will edit the old one with the correct version

thanks alot for wasting your time to help me... i do really appreciate it
sorry if my english is not good...

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blacklaser In reply to ihatemonday [2005-10-13 21:53:04 +0000 UTC]

No problem, I'm glad I could help. Nobody can do everthing.

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-11-22 14:40:33 +0000 UTC]

...it's already edited ... how it's look now ?

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blacklaser [2005-10-13 16:12:10 +0000 UTC]

Awesome, the design is perfect. The poem is great too, really capturing the emotions, but you should try to correct the grammatical errors.

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-11-22 15:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot, i'm very praised for the comment ...
Would you tell me about the right grammatical that i should do ? cause my english is not fluent enough ...
Thanks Black, you have amazing gallery .....

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-11-22 14:39:59 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot, i'm very praised for the comment ...
Would you tell me about the right grammatical that i should do ? cause my english is not fluent enough ...
Thanks Black, you have amazing gallery .....

--
'creative ability is not crime'

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ihatemonday In reply to blacklaser [2005-10-13 16:29:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot, i'm very praised for the comment ...
Would you tell me about the right grammatical that i should do ? cause my english is not fluent enough ...
Thanks Black, you have amazing gallery .....

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