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I wish I’d upped the stakes in chapter 9 to really emphasize “my” version where revenge won’t solve the real issue. I know there aren’t any consequences in game to Garrus’ loyalty mission, because coding a game where every mission has an impact that can change the course of the story is ridiculously difficult and/or didn’t matter.

But I had the luxury of an already set up story, so I could’ve expanded on it a bit. Maybe Harkin could’ve hurt Tali in retaliation? Or maybe a civilian gets caught in the middle of the final showdown? Just something to really justify the amount of ~*drama*~ in this page.

Anyway, hindsight’s a bitch, ya learn something new everyday.

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[prologue] [chapter 1] [chapter 2] [chapter 3] [chapter 4] [chapter 5]

[chapter 6] [chapter 7] [chapter 8] [chapter 9]

Description

I wish I’d upped the stakes in chapter 9 to really emphasize “my” version where revenge won’t solve the real issue. I know there aren’t any consequences in game to Garrus’ loyalty mission, because coding a game where every mission has an impact that can change the course of the story is ridiculously difficult and/or didn’t matter.

But I had the luxury of an already set up story, so I could’ve expanded on it a bit. Maybe Harkin could’ve hurt Tali in retaliation? Or maybe a civilian gets caught in the middle of the final showdown? Just something to really justify the amount of ~*drama*~ in this page.

Anyway, hindsight’s a bitch, ya learn something new everyday.

[previous page] [next page]

[my tumblr with random art]

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[prologue] [chapter 1] [chapter 2] [chapter 3] [chapter 4] [chapter 5]

[chapter 6] [chapter 7] [chapter 8] [chapter 9]