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Ikaramel In reply to reven94 [2011-09-25 13:22:20 +0000 UTC]

thanQ

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reven94 In reply to Ikaramel [2011-09-25 15:23:15 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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Ikaramel In reply to o0IceCream0o [2011-09-24 11:24:03 +0000 UTC]

thnx

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Ikaramel In reply to just-a-user [2011-09-23 14:54:10 +0000 UTC]

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Ikaramel In reply to zmote [2011-09-23 09:56:58 +0000 UTC]

agreed too i think i over did it a little make sure to give me critique when i update it inshallah

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zmote In reply to Ikaramel [2011-09-23 10:46:13 +0000 UTC]

I will.

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Ikaramel In reply to zmote [2011-09-23 13:02:00 +0000 UTC]

and now ?

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zmote In reply to Ikaramel [2011-09-23 13:57:54 +0000 UTC]

check out this link: [link]

I had to do it this way to show you what I would it like to be more like. I hadn't really time to work on it, but it should be enough to display you what I meant. I worked on the left pupil. The pupil is more defined this way, again, you could work on it, but the updated version of yours still looks like "unfished". I told you once, I think there so little you need to do on your painting so that the would go from "good" to "awesome". Therefore I tell you always that it looks "unfinished".

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Ikaramel In reply to zmote [2011-09-23 14:53:57 +0000 UTC]

oh ! am honored u actually took time to work on it i see what u ment xD, i still suck with cute eyes

i'll try to find a way to make my painting look ... "finished" then

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zmote In reply to Ikaramel [2011-09-23 15:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I just came back, I worked a little more on what I thought needed improving: [link]

I won't work on the image anymore, but I think you kinda get what I mean.

Man, if I had a linework as good as yours and your coloring. If you notice, I just worked on the shadowing and the mood. Keep it up.

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Ikaramel In reply to zmote [2011-09-23 15:42:58 +0000 UTC]

i see ; my version looks a lil faint and fuzzy ,


u can work more on it and keep it on your gallery if u want , and if u want to have a good lineart u just have to practice , i once was the worst painter in my class

thnx again , jazaka allahu khair ;D

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zmote In reply to Ikaramel [2011-09-23 15:45:03 +0000 UTC]

I strongly believe that there is little before you get awesome . I'll watch you.

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Ikaramel In reply to zmote [2011-09-23 15:52:09 +0000 UTC]

am doing my best ^^' , and with Allah's will i will

thnx for the watch , be severe in your critiques

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zmote In reply to Ikaramel [2011-09-23 15:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Ins'allah you will. I'm always honest in my critiques, because I think this way we can improve the fastest way.

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Ikaramel In reply to gelo-tim [2011-09-22 19:34:14 +0000 UTC]

hihi

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