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UtterlyLudicrous [2012-05-18 01:31:56 +0000 UTC]
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This is a very interesting style of PIRL, and I do really like how it turned out for a first try. The shadow on her mane turned out very realistic, and the perspective was very nicely done.
However, as good as it is, there were a few things that irk me about it.
For one, her actual shadow [the one casting down onto the grass], though realistically feathered, doesn't match the shape of Fluttershy herself. If you used Photoshop to create the PIRL, then it's fairly simple to make an accurate shadow. If not, then I'm not so sure, and you might have done the best job that you could have done, which is just fine, although it seems a bit too elongated to look very realistic.
If no one else has said it before me, the blurriness is a little irritating. If you drew this yourself using pastels [as I've seen a few deviants do in the past], then you've done a stupendous job, and you can skip to the next paragraph. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/wā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/> But if you intentionally made the vector that blurry, then I'm afraid you were either going for the wrong result or overdid your expectations. I use blur as well in my PIRLs, but I only use a blur of one pixel, maybe less, just so the vector blends a little more with the rest of the photo. So basically, it's a bit blurry, unless that's what you were going for.
Besides those two things, and a couple of potential touch-ups, it's a fantastic piece, and original to boot! You've done a marvelous job for a first timer, and with work and revision, you can improve your work to near-perfect status. Keep on doing what you're doing, man! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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ikillyou121 In reply to UtterlyLudicrous [2012-05-18 06:16:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique man. Like many people have said, it is too blurry. For the shadow, I actually based it off the shadow you see in the scene where Fluttershy jumps into the bush, which may be why it seems a little unrealistic. As for the vector paragraph, it isn't a vector. Fluttershy was drawn / painted purely using the paintbrush tool in photoshop. I used a very fuzzy brush which led to Fluttershy being too blurry. If I'd have used a less-fuzzy brush, is might've looked a lot better and clearer.
But like you said, for a first try, I feel like it was an excellent attempt and I can use the techniques which turned out successful in this in a possible future PIRL to make it 20% cooler.
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Darklps15 [2015-03-17 22:50:17 +0000 UTC]
This is soo good you have talent ^-^
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ha1e [2012-08-04 02:26:02 +0000 UTC]
I realy like this idea, going to watch you for more.
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oystercatcher7 [2012-03-31 13:42:29 +0000 UTC]
DAT FUR TECH
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ikillyou121 In reply to mihane100 [2012-03-17 13:21:16 +0000 UTC]
I suppose, but I don't really work on pictures that often.
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ikillyou121 In reply to mihane100 [2012-03-23 12:35:45 +0000 UTC]
Possibly but I don't really take requests.
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ikillyou121 In reply to mihane100 [2012-03-23 20:49:53 +0000 UTC]
Eh. Tbh, I'm not that interested in art trades.
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ikillyou121 In reply to mihane100 [2012-03-24 14:25:58 +0000 UTC]
Sure. That could work.
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mihane100 In reply to ikillyou121 [2012-03-24 14:36:41 +0000 UTC]
Ok, please can you draw Kimono and Minty in the MLP: FiM style?
[link]
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ponyshmony7827 [2012-03-08 23:47:25 +0000 UTC]
THIS IS A BIT FUZZY...but i like it owo i understand why it's fuzzy
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DarthTriforce [2012-02-28 21:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Cool thing^^
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oystercatcher7 [2012-02-27 21:37:49 +0000 UTC]
Could you send me one of the ponies or an instruction manual on how you created a dimensional portal?
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Pwndu232 [2012-02-27 14:39:48 +0000 UTC]
I knew they were real. Now, if only I could find this portal to Ponyville, that others have found. Don't believe me?
Watch this: [link]
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Pwndu232 In reply to ikillyou121 [2012-02-27 15:49:14 +0000 UTC]
Ah-ha! I knew it. Where is this portal? I must find it.
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Pwndu232 In reply to smokeybacon [2012-02-27 16:59:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Sadly... I don't have that much money. But it's nice to know it's a possibility.
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daniel-h-n [2012-02-26 00:22:33 +0000 UTC]
it's ok fluttershy, you didn't step on any ladybug
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FLARE3 [2012-02-25 20:33:02 +0000 UTC]
Is that your house in the background?
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ikillyou121 In reply to FLARE3 [2012-02-25 22:05:08 +0000 UTC]
Nah. I googled a picture of a field.
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Vunlinur [2012-02-25 19:30:01 +0000 UTC]
Strong blur We see...
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BlackWidower [2012-02-25 19:27:25 +0000 UTC]
Kinda blurry. Was that intentional?
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ikillyou121 In reply to BlackWidower [2012-02-25 22:03:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. But I didn't want it to turn out as blurry as it did.
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BlackWidower In reply to ikillyou121 [2012-02-25 22:35:46 +0000 UTC]
Can you undo or turn down the filter?
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ikillyou121 In reply to BlackWidower [2012-02-26 00:20:18 +0000 UTC]
It's not a filter. I just used a very fuzzy brush.
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BlackWidower In reply to ikillyou121 [2012-02-27 20:40:00 +0000 UTC]
AH! Well then use a less fuzzy brush.
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PUFFINSTUDIOS [2012-02-25 17:37:54 +0000 UTC]
brilliant photo!
please visit my gallery!
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the-derp-man24 [2012-02-25 17:09:02 +0000 UTC]
HORY SHET GRSAA
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LavaZombie [2012-02-25 16:32:19 +0000 UTC]
Awwww.
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