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Published: 2010-05-29 10:21:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1934; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 24
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The third page, for this I got the inspiration by that awesome circus arc T^T I loved that arc!!Ciel was so damn cute *please, Ciel, don't kill me for calling you cute* ahahPage 1 [link]
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i know he is cute i want him as my little brother just thinking about is cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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yes, he is so adorable *_*
but we must be careful in saying that XD If Ciel hears us we are dead!! ahah
anyway, thanks a lot for the fav
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Mhh, nice words used - though it's total out of character for Ciel. But it's your doujinshi so nevermind. XDD
I think it goes a bit too fast ... I mean the beginning is kind of too sudden. Where are they? And why is Ciel drooling? etc It feels like a better introduction is missing ... Anyway I adore Ciel's eyes in the 4th and 5th panel.
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Thank you very much for your comment. I appreciate you took the time to let me know your thoughts. It really helps me.
The beginning is from the manga chapter 34 I think, Ciel is drooling in that chapter because he feels sick...I don't know if it is understandable tough...because in this page is Sebastian who starts thinking so he remembers about that time...in fact I was not too sure it was clear...
Again, thank you very very much ^^
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You're welcome!
Aaah, chapter 34 .. I looked through it just now. The end of the circus arc, now I got it. ^_^ Aww, it was really a great chapter!~ Ciel was so vulnerable just then ..
Now it makes sense and some things like "Call my name" are similiar to that chapter. But, I'm sorry, you didn't really make it clear .. I mean, it's been a while since I read this chapter - the Kuroshitsuji chapters only come monthly and the last one was 45 .. so it's about 11 months ago that 34 was the newest chapter to come out. AAANYWAY, I think now I can better understand.
Though I'd suggest when you do something like this next time you should try to take things more slowly. Introduce the setting - like Baron Gelwin's chamber (maybe with the cage of the children or showing the empty wheelchair of the 'doctor' etc)s. Or you could've give more hints that Ciel barfed just now - like a panel of his feet where you can see a puddle before him. With these things you could've filled one page and THEN this page - your page 3 - would've come - and I think then it would've been clearer.
Sorry if I seem like nagging ... just giving my thoughts. Urgs. >____>
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ahah yes,you're right XD it was months ago indeed!
Sorry about that >-< it wasn't very clear in my mind neither...me too I read that months ago but the scene in which Ciel is so vulnerable was impressed in my mind...
I'll keep your advice in mind and I'll do that next time, Thank you :3!!Now that you told me I'll even try to make the page which would have come before page 3 to take a look at how it would have been!
And you're not nagging at all ^_^ your thoughts really help me!
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Okay, I'm glad!~~~ Thanks for not throwing stones at me!
Good luck with your drawing! :3
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