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Published: 2010-08-20 08:02:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 170; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description *Thoughts Provoked*

It Was Never a Matter,
Of How we Spent our Time.
We Did it our Way,
How We would Unwind.
The Blind Leading the Blind,
Yet it was "Our Way".
We Followed our Hearts,
And They were On Fire.
We had The Karma,
And The Desire.
So Much of You,
Became Me,
And I, So Much of You.
Our Minds and Bodies,
Pump Adrenaline Rush;
To Every Thought Provoked.
They are Thoughts only, Now,
Only Dreams from Afar.
Yet My Heart Remains Afire,
My Only Thoughts, They Are;
The Emotions that We Evoked..


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Comments: 3

hadesummit [2010-08-22 01:30:06 +0000 UTC]

at least your writings actually rhyme lol.ok first off very beautiful,i like it alot,second you should consider writing lyrics for songs cause this would make for a really good song ^^ the thoughts that came to mind with this was of a couple walking hand n hand & she's smiling as this is going thru her mind.again very well done

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ikreate In reply to hadesummit [2010-09-03 06:05:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you like this so much. Yet, poetry/literature, does not have to rhyme and as you read more of my lit you will see that it's true, that all of my lit doesn't rhyme. It's more about emotion with me, or exact thought and words, staightforward and to the point I do have some musician friends that have used and want to use them or parts of them for their music, which is kewl, as it sort of gets my name out there when they post my name for the lyrics in the credits. Yeah this one really came from the heart Yet they are thoughts only now.. Thanks so much again hon

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hadesummit In reply to ikreate [2010-09-03 08:54:12 +0000 UTC]

lol glad to know i'm not the only one,& again you and me are alot alike in the way we think,i prefer 'poetry' that doesnt rhyme,what ever is on my mind at the time & what i'm feeling is what i write down,i think when it's done like that then you really get to see inside a person,to know & understand just what they think & feel.so your welcome dear lol

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