The-Replicant [2014-08-06 09:08:29 +0000 UTC]
I really like how you describe the action. It's so vivid... really nice timing!
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ilduceGN In reply to The-Replicant [2014-08-06 23:32:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Though I probably could have had more, but I felt for a first chapter it was safe to have a few and have them be quick.
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