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Description I have to start out by thanking ~BlastIt . A while back he gave me some of his music and whilst I didn't listen to much of it for some time, I'm been listening to it a lot recently. From my experience, I'd be prepared to say that a mixture of Dream Theatre and Symphony X is perhaps the best inspiration one can get for Halo themed artwork, lots of religious fanaticism themes to it. Very Covenant-y. Good stuff.

Ahem, anyways, Antak again. I never really found any of the covenant weaponry on Halo that inspiring (Except the energy sword, but Antak isn't high enough ranked to get one of those), but logic denoted he had to have a covie weapon. My answer came in the form of what I've given him now, his own custom modded automatic carbine.
It also has a large, cleaver-like bayonet for use in close quarters. (I was determined to draw large this time and I did it so effectively that I ran out of room )

In thinking a bit more into his background, I have added a few things to it which I think will make him easier to use for potential future endeavours.
Antak's position within his squad is as a close-combat specialist. He favours medium-short ranged combat and is trained to a relatively high level of unarmed combat as well as in the use of knives and staffs. Long range sniping is for cowards, up close and personal is how a real warrior fights.

His other major combat skill is in technical expertise. As an amateur engineer, Antak is constantly fiddling with any new piece of technology, covenant or otherwise that he gets given, and won't be satisfied until he's completely disassembled it and put it back together again. The modifications to his carbine are his own handiwork, it features an automatic fire function which can be switched on or off when needed, an extended magazine which can be refilled with normal carbine mags in long battles, as well as the bayonet.
I'll draw it separate one day.

Anyway, just a WIP, I'm thinking of Photoshopping it, or inking and using coloured pencils. I had done another one which I may put straight to scraps, but I redrew him different because I wanted him to look somewhat more fearsome. He is, after all, the evil enemy for the first part of the story. We shall see.

TL;DR? Antak Koadamee is a close quarters specialist with a passion for engineering and an Automatic carbine. Go listen to some Dream Theatre.
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Comments: 31

Tsuki-Spartaness [2010-11-03 08:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant detail on the carbine and Antak's armor.
Pencil, I take it?

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scorch289 [2007-11-22 23:35:53 +0000 UTC]

<3 lol i likes the sketch here

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Yoofus [2007-08-15 18:04:04 +0000 UTC]

i'm constantly amazed at how you take enough time and care enough to answer everyone's comments and ideas.... that's really great! ^^... i suppose i could comment too.

do you have a secret for drawing plasma rifles?... not carabines (even if those look awsome) just plasma rifles? cuz i always make mine look mediocre... and by any chance.... do you think it would be a good idea to draw an elite FIRING his weapon? i dunno... it might look cool ^^ I NEED to learn how to photoshop but i think i'll stick to gimp right now...

and i'm not sure but don't you think that the elite's legs have too much of a similarity to human legs? or is that just the perspective?

anyway... fav for me... ^^ and thanks for the help on my other elite drawings... ( i got more and will be submitting them soon... about a week or so) GREAT JOB!!! ^^ bye *wort wort*

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to Yoofus [2007-08-16 10:46:50 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, I'm always happy for advice, sometimes it takes an outside view on something to get what you wanted out of a drawing.

I've never really tried drawing plasma rifles. Well I have once, but it was just a doodle. They're an odd looking weapon and I found them rather hard to draw properly...
My only tip would be to remember the shiny little patterns that go on the side. They're my favourite part of the gun and they're a good way to add extra detail to the picture. I never knew exactly what the pattern looks like so I made one up. As long as it looks sorta like a computer circuit board it should be fine! xD

Firing eh? Well... as it so happens... *looks down at the very picture I've just started colouring on photoshop*
Flame and glow works well on photoshop, you can get a lot more vivid colour in it than you can with pencil.

What part of the leg are you referring to? I've never really mastered the knee 100%, it's a really odd structure, the elite knee and I wish I had a skeleton to reference to. I think maybe I'll make the joint in the middle a bit longer next time, just to emphasise it.

Thanks very much for commenting and double thanks for the suggestions! I look forward to seeing your progress!

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Yoofus In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-08-16 20:26:28 +0000 UTC]

^^ no prob!!!
i'm glad your using photosop...really great things can come out of there!!! (i'll never be able to master it myself )

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to Yoofus [2007-08-18 07:01:02 +0000 UTC]

My photoshop skills are pretty average at the moment, but I've come quite a long way all the same. I'm trying a new technique on it at the moment. I find it's one of those things that you make a lot more progress on by attempting things that you're 90% certain you can't do and then battling through them.

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Yoofus In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-08-18 07:08:13 +0000 UTC]

hmmm...do you happen to still have the key thingy...

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to Yoofus [2007-08-19 06:08:44 +0000 UTC]

Key thingy?
Like a product key for photoshop? I only have a real ancient version of it, you'd be better advised to find a newer version...

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Yoofus In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-08-19 06:50:33 +0000 UTC]

yeah...darn... oh well, thanks anyway ^^

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starry-aurora [2007-07-23 07:37:26 +0000 UTC]

That's really accurate drawing! I love the detail on the carbine...and the scratches on the helmet add an authentic touch. Good job

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to starry-aurora [2007-07-29 07:32:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!
I was rather pleased with that carbine, I haven't drawn one until now and I'm happy with the result.

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bombarding [2007-07-18 07:48:35 +0000 UTC]

This is probably your most accurate and detailed elite to date though it has lost some of the sharpness and impact it had when I saw the original rather then this scanned version

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to bombarding [2007-07-18 09:56:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I was out to draw a real detailed elite.
They're so fun to draw, but they don't have an awful lot of detail. I was determined to fix this flaw at any cost, so I drew every single detail I thought was on them, including a bunch that I knew didn't!

It's a damned shame what scanners does to drawings, Is it too much to ask that it takes what's on paper and puts it on screen!?

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ArcliteShadow [2007-07-16 18:02:04 +0000 UTC]

I like, Antak sounds intimidating hee hee. The augmented Carbine is a very cool touch.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to ArcliteShadow [2007-07-17 09:59:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much!
I'm a fan of the human weaponry on Halo mostly, but I find the Elites and Hunters much cooler than the Spartans for some reason. Human weaponry makes big noisy bangs and sounds like a weapon ought to (Sniper rifle ftw!), the carbine is the only covenant weapon that really has that. With an automatic fire it'd be even better still so I figured it was what I'd just have to give him

All I need now is somewhere neat to stick a pair of big knives on his armour or something...

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ArcliteShadow In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-08-06 23:49:44 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm....big knives? that'd be cool. And i have to say, I like the Hunters a lot as well, their indestructible armor, their seperation(so to speak) from the rest of the Covenant caste system. And i love the spikes they had on their backs! In the books, they were not only used for intimidation but as a means of a mating call....if I remember correctly. I think it was the humans that created that hypothesis about the spikes. I just think they look freakin' cool!
Have you read the books? They are damn good, The Fall of Reach and The Ghosts of Onyx are my faves out of all of them. First Strike isn't bad either. And coincidentally, the parts where the Spartans meet the Hunters in Fall of Reach and in First Strike are some of my most memorable scenes, among others like John 117(Master Chief) beating the bloody pulp out of 3 ODSTs in a gym when he was still in training. Excellent reads. I highly recommend them.

Also, when I find/make the time, I'll work on some picture submissions to that fanfic of yours.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to ArcliteShadow [2007-08-17 23:55:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, the hunters were awesome but at the same time on Halo CE they were a bit of a joke with the one-shot kill once you learned where to shoot. The spines were definitely a wicked touch though.

I've read the first one I think, I really want to read the others but I can't find them anywhere except one guy who keeps forgetting to give them to me.
I liked the bit where MC finds the Jackal that got stepped on by a hunter. Talked about owned!

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ArcliteShadow In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-08-20 15:54:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that hunter showed him! lol

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to ArcliteShadow [2007-08-21 03:42:46 +0000 UTC]

"Hah! My shield will protect me! Oh Shi-" ~Jackal's last words

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BlastIt [2007-07-16 05:05:05 +0000 UTC]

Good stuff. Fresh from the max. anyways............yeah, I like the direction. I say you managed to avoid serious scanner raep as well. You managed to nail the perspective on the pose and armour pretty damn well.

btw, just a random example of the kind of shit I hate on the internets, these are the kind of people who make wappanese like me loook bad, also note that this comment was on a jewtube ENGLISH dub, not even proper subTITled anime:

manganimaxfan (16 hours ago)
honto! arigato gozaimasu! *bow* really, thanks sooo much! usually all the interesting animes are either in other languages, not here, deleted...or just well...so haonto arigato! *bow*


.........ouch, enjoy the lulz, and great pic.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to BlastIt [2007-07-16 10:11:41 +0000 UTC]

Heheh, thanks! I was real pleased with the perspective. There's not much, but still a tad moar than usual which is a step forwards. I've pretty much got the scanner beat on these pencil linearts, I scan first then slap a whole bunch of extra contrast in and it comes out looking as dark, if not darker than the original. Ah win the prize!

Interesting comment too lol, bit of an epic fail! So they're like "Thanks for translating it since my japanese is too crap to listen to it how it was intended, but I'll attempt to show off said japanese to try and impress you"

Poor you having something in common with them!

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a-iccara [2007-07-16 03:45:12 +0000 UTC]

Oohh, gorgeous gun! I love the detail...

I can't draw guns at all. x_x Anything other than a plasma rifle is UGH.

I love the personal touches you did with the armor... and the pose is nice as well. You have a nice style *w*


Hmm... if there was anything I could say... *chinrub* The mandibles could be a little longer, and not quite so flat, as they're jointed. They're pains to draw >.<
Proportion and everything is spot on though; hooves could be a bit taller but again that's style/preference :3

The chest armor looks a tad bit flat as well... To be honest I still have issues with the chestplate. It's hard to make it look dimensional, then again I'm an armor newb as is. xD

I really do like it though, and can't waaaait to see it colored... Antak certainly sounds interesting...

I really love your colored pencil work, but digital will suffice! I'm just a sucker for traditional ^-^

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to a-iccara [2007-07-17 10:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Oh hey thanks a lot for the long comment, double thanks for the crit too, very much appreciated!

Guns are a personal favourite thing to draw, I found a drawing of a big minigun I must have drawn when I was about 4 so it's one thing I've got a lot of experience on xD. Funny you should mention plasma rifles though, I did an earlier sketch of him with a pair of plasma rifles and I found them real hard, such an odd shape, I kept making them too big then too small then misaligning the two bits... PLASMA RIFLE IS UGH!

I'll fix the mandibles, I agree, they should be a bit longer and I'll try and bend the joint a bit so it can be seen. I hate drawing them, the one thing that irritates me drawing elites...
You're not the only one who's mentioned about the hooves so I'll go change them as well. I've ruined several pictures before making the legs too short and I get paranoid about it, If I extend the hooves a bit, I'll definetly be in the clear. I agree with the chestplate thing, I'd figure that thing'd be quite thick so I'd pad it out a bit too.

I've been doing my photoshop without lines anyway starting from pencil sketches... so I'll do both! Pencil will be done quicker and If I get around to digital I'll do that too. I have some new stuff I want to try on an elite with regards to photoshop...

Well many thanks again for the comment, very glad you him!
If you think I'm doing something wrong on the character/background side of him -or any of my characters however, please tell me! You're the kickass writer, not me, if I'm not doing something right, I need to know, since I won't figure it out on my own. Don't be afraid to tell me off for things, I take criticism well.

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WispyChipmunk [2007-07-15 17:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is really nice. I love the battle damage on his helmet. The only little things I would suggest is to make his mandibles longer. They look a little short. His feet look great, too, but I'd say make his 'toes' longer. Other than that, awesome work. Can't wait to see this colored.

And I'd say color it with colored pencils. I really like your colored pencil work.

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to WispyChipmunk [2007-07-22 10:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much! Hopefully I'll get this coloured soon...

Thanks very much for the critique too, I've changed the mandibles and the feet a bit (I haven't updated the file though) and I think it looks a lot better now. Thanks again!

I think I might actually do both, pencils are quicker and I'll get it done faster, but I've got some new techniques I'd like to take to an elite with on photoshop as well...
...Or I could stop being lazy and draw a new one for photoshop! xD

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echoyoyo [2007-07-15 09:32:25 +0000 UTC]

I am waiting for this to be colored

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to echoyoyo [2007-07-16 10:14:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I'm pretty keep to do the colour for this, elites are fun to do, nice smooth metal gradients!

What do you reckon I should do with it though? Pencils or photoshop? I'm inclined to think photoshop, I have some new techniques to try out...

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echoyoyo In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-07-16 11:11:09 +0000 UTC]

I would say.... Maybe photoshop first, and then do the pencil version if u still got time and interest.
I am anticipating some great work U better not let me down. But do take ur time. Do the important stuff first. Rushing usually doesn't help achieving the full potential of the artist.

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Xemos [2007-07-15 08:11:29 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I need to comment this. XD

This is pretty rad Lynx, specially that gun of his (Although I think it should be smaller) Seriously, how can he use that thing in close combat effectively? :/

But still, pretty awesome all the same, I can't wait to see the colored version when it comes out. ^^

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Illogical-Lynx In reply to Xemos [2007-07-17 06:03:09 +0000 UTC]

Too big you say? Hmm...
I didn't use a direct reference of an elite holding a carbine, just an image off the net of the gun itself. I found this on google which is how big it's supposed to be.
Just holding my fingers against the screen I think you might be right, it does look perhaps a bit too long...
Thanks very much for pointing that out, I have to remember to keep things correctly sized, especially when I'm using a design that isn't my own.

The idea I had for it was (admittedly very much inspired by GoW's Chainsaw gun xD) a large halberd shaped bayonet on the underside of the barrel extending past the end of the barrel so the gun itself could be swung with two hands like a battle axe or thrusted like a spear. Unfortunately I ran out of room on the page so I drew just the fixture where the blade goes as if he's taken it off for some reason.

Thanks very much for commenting and for the crit as well very much appreciated!

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Xemos In reply to Illogical-Lynx [2007-07-17 06:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome! ^^ I can often find such things, and I want to see what you want it to look like XD

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