Comments: 119
ilolamai In reply to ??? [2009-07-22 14:37:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your critique,it's a critique that i really want.I Know that i do not comprehend much about light and shadow,i will study more.Thanks for your comment about background and other things,i'll remember that and i will try to correct them in my next piece.Thanks again^^
π: 0 β©: 0
ilolamai In reply to xXOceanSkyXx [2009-07-22 14:47:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks Sky^^.I can draw machines,car,plane,sun,robot and other things if i have their references.But sometime i'm too lazy to find them.
I'll try and i'm trying to get better.Let's go together^^
π: 0 β©: 0
BoggeyDan [2009-07-21 15:34:10 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Awwwww, this one is really great! This one is a very nice piece that has a lot of Full Metal Panic love in it.
The ARX-7 Arbalest is very detailed, accurate and well-drawn, with many of the details on the Arm Slave's head area done well. There are some colors that aren't quite right, such as the black armor panels (on the head and cheek) should be navy blue, and that the eye sensors should be cyan.
Still, it's not a bad thing really, since the mecha is still instantly recognizable as Sousuke Sagara's personal Arm Slave! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Tessa Testarossa is so lovely in swimwear, plus she has a really nice pose! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h⦠" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart" /> The color choices are also pretty good as well - magenta for her hair ribbon (instead of the usual blue), and red for her one-piece! Strange that her eyes here are green, whereas they should be gray in color. But who wants boring grays, anyway? e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />
As I have said before, you really have grown so much, your technique is so very well-implemented (way more than when I added you to my watchlist last November 2008), such as the linearts, the coloring, and the really amazing shading. The actual background (the sky and the sea), though not seen much here, is still superbly done.
There are still a few inconsistencies, such as the color of the lineart not matching the background here and there (very evident on certain parts on Tessa), and the light sourcing somewhat, but that's just minor nitpicking here, really.
Truly a piece that has a lot of love in it, keep up with the greatness and you'll get more than just praise, critiques and faves! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww" />
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to BoggeyDan [2009-07-21 16:21:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow!My first critiques!Thank you very much BoggeyDan.I really appreciate it.
My problem when i draw fanart is that i couldn't find the right color of the original.As you can see,many fanart pieces of mine have different colors from original.Maybe because of my color blindess(Yes!I'm color blind.Red-green color blindness)And i don't like to use eyedropper tool to get the colors,I love to choose mine.But sometime,it's because of my careless too^^
The color of the lineart is another problem too.Some tutorial said that you should not use black line art but use brown.But someone say do not use brown but use black and some say use the same color of that part.I'm confused but i'm still trying to find what's suit my style(but never found yet)
Thank you very much.I will try and try.Not only said but i'll do^^
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to BoggeyDan [2009-07-22 15:35:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow!Thank you very much.It's the best tutorial that i've ever read.It tells me everything that i need to know.And other tutorials in his gallery are really good too.They are really useful,I think i can improve more by them.Thank you BoggeyDan^^
π: 0 β©: 1
teabound [2013-09-19 22:20:34 +0000 UTC]
Your Β Welcome!
π: 0 β©: 0
teabound [2013-06-28 21:23:30 +0000 UTC]
Sweet and sexy Tessa picture!
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to teabound [2013-09-18 04:38:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
π: 0 β©: 0
shinjiasuka4ever [2012-09-08 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Lovely pic of Tess and the Arbalest, nice work!
π: 0 β©: 1
Heli-Starr2 [2011-08-25 03:32:20 +0000 UTC]
Very pretty artwork.
π: 0 β©: 1
D0minatus [2011-05-23 23:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Bien dessinΓ©.
π: 0 β©: 1
suki12345 [2011-03-22 15:16:58 +0000 UTC]
i'm on the second season of the so\how and i like kaname better but tessa awesome to ^^
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to suki12345 [2011-03-22 16:41:48 +0000 UTC]
Every girl that i know like Kaname more than Tessa.And every boy that i know like Tassa more than Kaname^^
π: 0 β©: 1
suki12345 In reply to ilolamai [2011-03-22 17:08:39 +0000 UTC]
^^ well its not that i like Kaname more than Tessa but i don't think i would like the series as much if Kaname wasn't in it ^^
π: 0 β©: 0
Tamorii [2010-11-17 15:56:46 +0000 UTC]
Haha my name is Tessa xD lol now I really have to watch Full Metal panic I wanna see that Tessa
But woah this drawing is so epic <3 That mega/robot thing is very cool 8D And the sky on the background is really pretty too ;D
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to Tamorii [2010-11-18 14:53:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh!hello Tessa.Nice to meet you^^
Thank you very much.
π: 0 β©: 1
Tamorii In reply to ilolamai [2010-11-18 16:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Hahaa :'D
Ur welcome ;D
π: 0 β©: 0
ilolamai In reply to f1georgemotogp [2009-10-15 14:56:20 +0000 UTC]
Oh!then Sousuke is masochist LOL
I see her reference from the first FMP.
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to f1georgemotogp [2009-10-16 14:07:13 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha,i never thought that.This is a new theory about him that i heard.
π: 0 β©: 1
TypeZERO-DA7 [2009-09-25 14:22:08 +0000 UTC]
omg love it especially tessa LOL also omg um have u seen the whole 3 series
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to TypeZERO-DA7 [2009-09-25 14:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.Yeah i've seen them all.Waiting for the 4th.
π: 0 β©: 1
TypeZERO-DA7 In reply to ilolamai [2009-09-25 14:36:57 +0000 UTC]
theres a 4th omg when
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to TypeZERO-DA7 [2009-09-25 14:43:46 +0000 UTC]
I don't know.Maybe we must wait until the light novel is end.
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to shigeru-chan [2009-09-18 14:02:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you^^ It's easier than you thought.I only use gradient tool to color it.
π: 0 β©: 0
Aivilo0 [2009-07-25 19:46:29 +0000 UTC]
I love the hair and the metal in the Background^^
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to Aivilo0 [2009-07-26 14:18:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much^^
π: 0 β©: 0
RyuumiGaroukuni [2009-07-25 04:12:42 +0000 UTC]
... Awesome! That's all I'm going to say!
π: 0 β©: 1
ilolamai In reply to GodsOnVacation [2009-07-24 14:24:39 +0000 UTC]
No.It's not Mobile suit,it's Arm slave.But i just wonder,do you know what am i talking about LOL
π: 0 β©: 1
GodsOnVacation In reply to ilolamai [2009-07-25 08:26:03 +0000 UTC]
not at all lol I was never a fan of the robots and such lol
π: 0 β©: 1
| Next =>