Comments: 40
Aromaluver [2014-02-01 23:31:20 +0000 UTC]
I love how good this is and specifically how gorgeous Avril can be without all the black she generally wears around her eyes. Love it!
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angellove97 [2010-05-07 12:36:31 +0000 UTC]
This is realy good, and you did it with mouse!Wow!
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leocavallini [2009-06-10 05:06:12 +0000 UTC]
your work is amazing!
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salamander-spice [2009-01-18 18:30:38 +0000 UTC]
O.O
omg thats sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooood!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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THEbatgirl [2008-12-05 03:09:13 +0000 UTC]
REALLY GOOD.
-inshockshock-
..double shock? XD
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arkit3k [2008-11-22 03:39:50 +0000 UTC]
aite.
NOTE: this is RIDICULOUSLY good with a mouse, i'm stoked to see what you will produce with the tablet. I'm giving crit blatantly so... it might sound a bit harsh.
nose... something is wrong w/ the highlights on the bulb.
eyelashes are mediocre, they work, but not to their fullest. eyebrows don't usually curve upwards so much, more like down towards the outside of the eye.
Even avril's eyelashes aren't that thick haha
Eyebrow blending is quite.. terrible? as is the blending of the flesh around the lip.
lip has pretty aite colors, good job there.
hair = nice stuff. could be simplified a bit more and keep the effect... but seeing as it is done, good work.
no shadow under chin on neck?
missing some minor shadows and highlights, esp around the lip and in that "crest" above the lip.
the iris(?) of the eye (the gray part) is not depthy enough...
though i like the pink in the sclera.
Overall: good job. especially with mouse.
how long did this take w/ a mouse?
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iloovedoggies In reply to arkit3k [2008-11-22 05:11:35 +0000 UTC]
ah thanks for all the critique [:
im very aware of all the lack of shadows/highlights x_x
and i probably shouldn't get lazy otherwise the face looks flat XD
and ionno about the eyebrows
cuz celebrities tend to pluck their eyebrows lot pretty high up too
heres the reference
[link]
i think in the reference her eyebrows are curved more upwards though ;o
this took approximately a year
it was on and off
mostly off lol
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iloovedoggies In reply to arkit3k [2008-11-22 08:05:22 +0000 UTC]
oh
wrong link then
LET ME FIND IT AGAIN~~~~
os=4"[LINK]
there we go
and yeah i think i did seperate layers for the eyebrows
but bblaahh i messed up a lot of things XD
and yeah i noticed that lighter colored skin too XDDDD
and i also forgot to shade the eyebrows too x__x;;
and eyelashes....
and a lot of things.. lol
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Rainbow-Sherbert [2008-11-21 23:55:34 +0000 UTC]
aslkjdg oh god this is really good how do you do this with a mouse. ): /jealous
I KNOW IT SAYS ADVANCED CRITIQUE ENCOURAGED BUT I'M AN EXCEPTION RIGHT 8Db
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iloovedoggies In reply to Rainbow-Sherbert [2008-11-22 01:44:53 +0000 UTC]
no you're no exception >OOO poophead XDD
jkjk :3
i... dont know how i did it with a mouse
i suppose i wanted to do it
but didn't have a tablet... so the only other option was mouse xD
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Rainbow-Sherbert In reply to iloovedoggies [2008-11-22 03:17:19 +0000 UTC]
i'm an exception to everything!
i can't do anything with a mouse anymore XD
except click things. -click-
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hajs5 [2008-11-21 06:56:25 +0000 UTC]
Considering you did that with a mouse that's amazing. I use a mouse for some pixel art stuff Pixel per pixel and that takes awhile to. If you made a slightly more drastic contrast in shading on the nose on the left side of the arc it would look better and not look like it's fusing back into the face.
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hajs5 In reply to iloovedoggies [2008-11-21 06:58:36 +0000 UTC]
kk, yeah it's just that little thing and it would look better. Good job by the way.
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FallenAngelsRising [2008-11-21 06:56:04 +0000 UTC]
thats crazy good especially with the mouse.
well done
serisouly.
the only thing that bothers me is the eye on the left its kind of paris hilton ish on the one side closest to the nose..
but over all great pic,
maybe wanna out line the left side of the nose a bit more..
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FallenAngelsRising In reply to iloovedoggies [2008-11-21 07:00:35 +0000 UTC]
all good lolol
i actually thought it was a real picture at first though lololol
then i was like nooo...lolol
is it?
enlarged it and i was ike.
omfg thats photoshops! lolol
cool cool
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kero351 [2008-11-21 06:55:39 +0000 UTC]
the right eye is a little off, however considering this was done by mouse it is fairly impressive. Another problem would be the left eyebrow.
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iloovedoggies In reply to kero351 [2008-11-21 06:59:04 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
so the left eyebrow?
oh
gosh o__o... it looks like she barely has any eyebrow XD
thanks for the critique!
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kero351 In reply to iloovedoggies [2008-11-21 07:06:12 +0000 UTC]
no problem; just saw it on the front page and was bored so... yeah.
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