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Ilovevegeta123 — Before OB chap1 cover1

Published: 2011-01-28 06:03:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 680; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 252
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Description yea, a new story coming from me <3

This is the story before the story my fanfic [link]

I dunno if i should make it a comic or a fanfiction though :/

From high to low : Tesseki Kimuyama , Kazuhei Iwayama , Egaio Izawa (c) me

page 1 [link]

do not use without permission from me
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Comments: 31

kariuchiha16 [2011-01-28 17:16:49 +0000 UTC]

ur good at comics!^^

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to kariuchiha16 [2011-01-29 01:40:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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kariuchiha16 In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 03:42:18 +0000 UTC]

of course!

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chainedshadow14 [2011-01-28 15:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to chainedshadow14 [2011-01-29 01:39:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Aspi-Galou [2011-01-28 14:53:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhh Kazuhei !

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 01:40:53 +0000 UTC]

he's cute right xD

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 07:49:33 +0000 UTC]

And the girl, Egaio Izawa, she is Dei's mommy ?

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 07:51:42 +0000 UTC]

yush, yush <3

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 08:02:35 +0000 UTC]

She is pretty !

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 08:10:34 +0000 UTC]

indeeeed , that explains Dei's prettiness

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 08:24:43 +0000 UTC]

And girl face ?
...
...
Okay ! Okay ! I leave !

XD

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 08:27:59 +0000 UTC]

lolol xD

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 08:28:55 +0000 UTC]

I
MUST
STOP
COFFEE !

X'D

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 08:30:43 +0000 UTC]

lol, why? i love coffee....

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 08:32:55 +0000 UTC]

Me too ! That's the problem ! XD
After I'm like that ==>

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 08:34:44 +0000 UTC]

oh crap XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 08:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Or like this ==>

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Aspi-Galou [2011-01-29 08:41:20 +0000 UTC]

OMG! THAT IS THE WORST PROBLEM OF ALL!

hahaha

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-29 08:42:20 +0000 UTC]

True !

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PeterSassyPan [2011-01-28 12:10:23 +0000 UTC]

oh wow., like the coloring here., and the characters., great job!

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to PeterSassyPan [2011-01-29 01:39:52 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^

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Zi-Dawg [2011-01-28 10:02:51 +0000 UTC]

WOW! It look amazing Vivi...can't wait for page 1

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to Zi-Dawg [2011-01-28 10:30:21 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks

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bob-brown [2011-01-28 09:19:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh~ This is going to be interesting! By the way, will you be continuing "Only Brief" sometime or is it finished?

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to bob-brown [2011-01-28 10:30:09 +0000 UTC]

I will , when i get more idea XD

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bob-brown In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-28 10:38:25 +0000 UTC]

I see~ Well you could always send them on a mission ^___^

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Ilovevegeta123 In reply to bob-brown [2011-01-28 10:44:01 +0000 UTC]

yes, that's what im going to do lol But i cant think of what mission yet. Care to help me out ? i need a C rank mission for them .

btw. i have decided that 'Before OB' will be a comic while 'OB' will be a fanfic

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bob-brown In reply to Ilovevegeta123 [2011-01-28 11:41:13 +0000 UTC]

Help? I'll try!
For a C rank mission.. here are a few random ideas
- Delivering a letter to a person in an alliance country (it would be too dangerous if it wasn't in alliance)
- Escorting a person of semi-importance (most likely to a close country)
- Relief teaching of the ninja academy (since fore D rank it would be too hard and the B,A,S rank ninjas would be too busy)
But really, C rank missions are hard to think up.

Ah, I see, then you'd have both writing and pictures in your gallery. Good idea.

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silverhedgehog2009 [2011-01-28 07:09:35 +0000 UTC]

cool

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silverhedgehog2009 [2011-01-28 06:49:04 +0000 UTC]

awsome

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