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Imithe — Sketch - Redlines please?

Published: 2012-04-30 19:16:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 670; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 14
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Description This is supposed to be a stylized grey wolf.
I redrawed this thing at least 15 times and I am not even joking... it still looks weird... :c
Can you please give me some critiques / redlines on the anatomy?

Oh and in case you were wondering - this is going to be an AT for... someone... o3o

EDIT: More fluff, longer tail + some other minor edits


I used this photo by *SalsolaStock as a pose reference - [link]
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Comments: 49

Feline-Kat [2012-12-30 06:28:21 +0000 UTC]

I could redline this but I really don't see many flaws, the anatomy is amazing!

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BananaWaffle [2012-05-06 21:03:25 +0000 UTC]

To be honest, I think this is very good! I really dont see anything wrong.

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Imithe In reply to BananaWaffle [2012-05-07 13:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Really? Thank you very much! <3

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BananaWaffle In reply to Imithe [2012-05-07 21:17:01 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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xJabukax2 [2012-05-06 19:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Wow why do you have to be so amazing??
Honestly,I don't see anything wrong on this lineart at all,it looks absolutely perfect <3

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Imithe In reply to xJabukax2 [2012-05-07 13:28:54 +0000 UTC]

You really think so? 8D Thank you very much! I am glad you like it. <3

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Novie-Kenari [2012-05-03 06:59:00 +0000 UTC]

i think your rump that connects the tail might be just a bit too high, and your chin line goes in a little far. also the last back leg should probably be in a adifrent place, but other then that i think this is fine ^^

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Imithe In reply to Novie-Kenari [2012-05-04 17:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for your opinion on this! I really appreciate it! <3

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Stormjumper19 [2012-05-03 04:36:38 +0000 UTC]

This is really good! The paws look a little small to me, but they are accurate to the reference and look pretty good.
The nose seems a little large to me.
Otherwise this is a really good lineart! I love the feathery look on the edges

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Imithe In reply to Stormjumper19 [2012-05-04 17:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I am going to change the nose right away. c:

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Stormjumper19 In reply to Imithe [2012-05-05 01:38:36 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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DShain [2012-05-02 15:22:01 +0000 UTC]

I've never seen lineart with such a soft look. The fur itself, without additional colors and details, looks like silk! You very good with canine anatomy.

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Imithe In reply to DShain [2012-05-02 17:47:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! It means alot to me coming from you! 8D

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DShain In reply to Imithe [2012-05-02 20:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm flattered! Thank you.

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Mistress-Fluffeh [2012-05-02 09:25:10 +0000 UTC]

There's one thing, that stock photo isn't a grey wolf. It's an Arctic wolf..

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Imithe In reply to Mistress-Fluffeh [2012-05-02 12:21:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I know. I used it just as a pose reference. 8D

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Zintah [2012-05-02 03:23:23 +0000 UTC]

This...is amazing. o-o<3

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Imithe In reply to Zintah [2012-05-02 12:22:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Zintah In reply to Imithe [2012-05-02 13:07:08 +0000 UTC]

No problem!<3

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Shelly27 [2012-05-01 07:39:57 +0000 UTC]

a hlavne ta velmi prosim, nic neopravuj !! ( hlavne stehna a hrud, kt. vobec nie su mohutne!!!)

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Shelly27 [2012-05-01 07:37:43 +0000 UTC]

" Nechlpaty" chvost som si na prvy pohlad ani nevsimla. Nebudem predsa vyhladavat nasilu chyby tam kde nie su, ze? Podla mna je to dokonale. Usi, labky, srst, telo a tiez perfektny lineart To mi pripomina ake mnozstvo veci sa mam este naucit

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Katryano In reply to Shelly27 [2012-05-01 17:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Aj mne, XD

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Imithe In reply to Shelly27 [2012-05-01 11:08:14 +0000 UTC]

Díky za pekný koment! Teraz som na tom síce pár vecí zmenila, ale myslím si, že je to o niečo lepšie. 8D

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Shelly27 In reply to Imithe [2012-05-01 13:06:44 +0000 UTC]

ach ano, vidim :3 zmenila si chvost! a teraz je to uz perfektne

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Katryano [2012-05-01 07:21:56 +0000 UTC]

Áno, môžem súhlasíť s tým že ten chvost je málo chlpatý, ale to je asi všetko čo si myslím Ja veľmi anatómiu neovládam takže nechcem ničiť dielo Picassa. Je to proste nádherné. Neviem sa dočkať pre koho je ten art trade c:

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Imithe In reply to Katryano [2012-05-01 11:05:35 +0000 UTC]

OO ďakujem 8D Už som to trocha pozmenila... takže snáď je to teraz lepšie XD

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LittleRavine [2012-04-30 22:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow I wish my "bad" skectched looked like this... haha no I think it's perfect. Pretty much what everyone else said covers is. I think the neck fur was a good idea and then the tail, as well. VERY well done.

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Imithe In reply to LittleRavine [2012-05-01 11:04:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol, thank you very much! 8D I just edited it a bit, does it look better now? c:

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LittleRavine In reply to Imithe [2012-05-01 22:32:10 +0000 UTC]

PERFECT

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KiliijaNikka [2012-04-30 19:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Takže, začnu od... začátku? Takže, ocas by mohl být trochu delší a chlupatější, méně mohutné tělo (hlavně hruď), větší stehna(z mého hlediska jsou až příliš drobná - ale sama přesně nevím, aby byly větší bez toho aby zanikly ._. ), mohla by být prohnutější křivka zad, hlavu trochu sešikmit dolů a toť asi vše.
Tohle jsou jen "menší" tipy ke stylizování (podle mně, bohužel ) takže na to neber nějaké velké ohledy

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Imithe In reply to KiliijaNikka [2012-04-30 19:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Díky za kritiku, vážim si to! <3
Ešte počkám čo na to povedia ostatní a potom sa pokúsim moje chyby opraviť. 8D

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kikiWolvess99 [2012-04-30 19:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Nádherné, já žasnu! o.O Jak ty dokážeš takto kreslit? Je to tak reálné! x3

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Imithe In reply to kikiWolvess99 [2012-04-30 19:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Jéj, díky! o3o No, keď to kreslím podľa fotiek, tak to je hneď o niečo ľahšie. 8D

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kikiWolvess99 In reply to Imithe [2012-04-30 19:45:55 +0000 UTC]

To já když kreslím podle fotek, tak to dopadne strašně, takže kreslím podle vlastní fantasie 8D
A nemáš zač c:

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DeeryDeerth [2012-04-30 19:33:31 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful! Your anatomy is great, I love it! The sketch is already beautiful!

Though isn't the tail a little bit too small? Or is it just me? *hides in shame*

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Imithe In reply to DeeryDeerth [2012-04-30 19:41:08 +0000 UTC]


Thank you so much!
Now that you point it out... it does seem a bit small to me 8"D
I am such a horrible person... I always notice my mistakes AFTER I post here my picture XD

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DeeryDeerth In reply to Imithe [2012-04-30 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Your art is always so gorgeousss, even your lineart.

Really? I thought it was just my imagination. |D
Bah, don't worry, always happens to me too. xD

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Imithe In reply to DeeryDeerth [2012-05-01 18:39:50 +0000 UTC]

You are so kind! Thanks again!
I have already fixed the tail + made some other minor updates. :3 Does it look better now? 8D

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DeeryDeerth In reply to Imithe [2012-05-01 18:59:25 +0000 UTC]

*falls over of Bro-hug*
*returns a * xD

N'aw, I'm not that kind!
You're very welcome!

OMG YES, YES! I looks perfect, flawless now! :'D
Can't see a single mistake anymore!

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LonelyGingerWolf [2012-04-30 19:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Well.... to be honest the wolf in the photo (aka not this one) looks a bit weird.... maybe it was still a pup or something...

BUT I think your anatomy is amazing... it just looks so real Maybe to make it look more wolf-ish you should add more neck fur... but it's also fine as it is

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Imithe In reply to LonelyGingerWolf [2012-04-30 19:29:49 +0000 UTC]

Neck fur, check! Thank you! I am going to fix it! 8D

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LonelyGingerWolf In reply to Imithe [2012-04-30 19:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehee glad I could be of any use

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AvantisArt [2012-04-30 19:26:07 +0000 UTC]

Moc hezký!!! Ja chví tablééééééééééééét! TT_TT

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Imithe In reply to AvantisArt [2012-04-30 19:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Ty aj s myšou kreslíš nádherne! o3o Rada by som ti pomohla zohnať tablet, ale neviem ako... ._.
Hmm... rozmýšľala si už niekedy kresliť obrázky za peniaze? o3o

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AvantisArt In reply to Imithe [2012-04-30 21:06:13 +0000 UTC]

Veľmi nie Ale vďaka no... a kto by to kůpil? Už to vidím, musela by som postúpiť plastickú operáciu aby som mala psie oči. A potom by som si dala cibuľu a cesnak okolo krku. To zaručí slzy. Zo psími očami, a so slzami v nich určitie niečo predám

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Imithe In reply to AvantisArt [2012-05-01 11:09:31 +0000 UTC]

Kebyže mi to rodičia povolili, tak ja by som si od teba kľudne niečo kúpila. 8D A určite by sa okrem mňa našli aj nejakí iní... 8D

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AvantisArt In reply to Imithe [2012-05-01 11:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Jasné Na čo kúpovať? Ja moje kresby posielam poštou pre priateľou Napr Nuntis jsem poslala si 5 skic

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BAPHENDIGO [2012-04-30 19:23:00 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAY To je dokonalý! Ta anatomie vypadá dobře Oo" ...u mě je to bez kritiky,omlouvám se xD

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Imithe In reply to BAPHENDIGO [2012-04-30 19:25:19 +0000 UTC]

Wow, ďakujem! 8D Mňa na tom stále niečo otravuje, ale neviem ako to opraviť... XD

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