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Immonia — Party on the Floor
Published: 2013-04-28 12:12:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 331; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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I had an odd amount of attention on a piece I drew a few days back. I'd be fine with this if it was something that I was more proud of. So here's my response to the piece. Fave this guys. See the difference between my "worthy" art and something I just farted out? Punish me for producing poor art(When you know I can do better) don't reward me XD Unless rewarding me gets me to produce better art like it did here.Edit: Added the same type of boarder as the other one. Maybe that makes it more appealing?? idk /edit
Edit: I changed a few things with the color scheme to separate it from the first drawing. I added more contrast and dropped the similar boarder. You can now see the blood looking stuff better. /edit
Here's the other one
Commission Info
Like what you see? Commission me, yeah? [link]
Al and art by me! - [Gray] [link]
Microsoft paint and tablet
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I personally prefer the other one because it's so much simpler than this, and the loose "farted out" style of it makes it a lot grittier and seems to fit better with the character. On this one it honestly looks like you're trying too hard, which detracts from the value of the art.
Idk both pieces are good in my opinion, and this one is technically better in terms of being fancy and looking nice, but the other one just has a lot more life to it than this one.
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oh I got a better word for overly detailed. It's more like busy or too much going on. I think that's what you're trying to say. That makes sense too. Thanks for the comment.
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Ya too much going on. In the other picture it's a lot easier to figure out the mood and tone and emotion behind the character, but in this picture it's all in the detail and nothing in the emotion.
Ah another problem that I just realized is that the other one has a lot more contrast between the subject (the headshot) and the background in terms of how saturated the colors are themselves. If you used the exact same color pallet for both pictures I get the feeling that this picture would be a lot more appealing to the subconscious ^^
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I changed a few things. I probably won't make anymore dramatic changes to this.
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oooooooo yes much better ^^ you didn't have to change it XD but it does look even better now <3
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This was the most helpful comment I've had all day.
That totally makes sense with how you put it. Thanks a lot. Hmm trying too hard? Overly detailed?
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