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Published: 2004-03-25 16:42:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 115; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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Description Windless Nights
March 24, 2004

She sits alone in a cold, dark corner, looking out at her surroundings,
realizing that she is falling and falling,
never able to get up.
The world around her keeps on moving,
but the one square of ground she owns, and can claim as her own,
is as still as the windless night.
Although the dark is her enemy, it is also her best friend.
Even though she is terrified, she is peaceful and calm.
As everything around her tumbles and crumbles,
as everyone falls apart,
she stands up, and steps out, to see what has become of that,
which was her world.
Shattered and torn,
dirty and ugly,
the shambles around her creak beneath her feet.
The shadows crawl along the walls,
as the noises around her transform into words,
she awakes from nothingness,
and asks the usual questions,
such as how? when? and why?
but then she askes the one least expected,
who?

Why...it was you little girl, didn't you know?

She realizes, she did this with her own hands.

As terror creeps through her veins,
and shock fills her eyes,
she hits the floor, and cries, while her hair falls with the tears,
in another one of her,
Windless Nights.
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Comments: 15

FieryDragoness [2004-04-02 15:33:57 +0000 UTC]

I dont understand it very well, but I feel liek I like it, and its very well writen

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Immortal-Phoenix In reply to FieryDragoness [2004-04-02 15:35:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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FieryDragoness In reply to Immortal-Phoenix [2004-04-02 15:37:45 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome

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Mooshu [2004-03-29 23:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmm quite yummy this is a nice tale to send a chill up your spine...beautiful... nice vision and imagery

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Immortal-Phoenix In reply to Mooshu [2004-03-30 14:12:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Alexdria [2004-03-26 17:10:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow!!!! I mean, just wow!!! I love this...Very dark, deep....creepy...I'd say I couldn't figure this one out....I think this is your best one yet...definately +fav!!!

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Immortal-Phoenix In reply to Alexdria [2004-03-26 18:24:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Alexdria In reply to Immortal-Phoenix [2004-03-26 18:25:48 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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kanditiaofthestars [2004-03-25 17:45:09 +0000 UTC]

woot-to the-ness. you rock, chick. eeeeeeechie lol.

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meeyuh [2004-03-25 17:31:10 +0000 UTC]

Deep. Me likes.

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Immortal-Phoenix In reply to meeyuh [2004-03-25 17:38:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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starfreek913 [2004-03-25 17:30:29 +0000 UTC]

that is AWESOME!!!

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Immortal-Phoenix In reply to starfreek913 [2004-03-25 17:36:34 +0000 UTC]

thank you...

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hatefull [2004-03-25 16:58:21 +0000 UTC]

very nice and creepy

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Immortal-Phoenix In reply to hatefull [2004-03-25 17:13:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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