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Impious-Imp — Taka of the Raptors V 1.2
Published: 2006-11-06 03:54:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 913; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 16
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Carbon copied head with an updated body.(carbon paper comes in handy!)
The haiku? Just something to fill up space.
Yeah.. it's a case of the fillerbunny.
Mind yourself as the deviation isn't the haiku cause I Suck at poetry.
It's just there. And also it's some sort of wierd ass anime..
some sort of Mise en Scene thing... I don't know..
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Very, very gorgeous! The attire, the stern face, the eyes...All adds up to a fantastic picture the definately deserves a 
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Ahh, cool! When I was little, someone asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I told them "Dinosaur!"
If I'd known there were samurai dinosaurs, I'd have said that instead.
Really a cool concept. I'd like to see more shading. it looks like you got started on his foot and then lost interest soon after. The structure is really working for you.
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Actually, the thing on the foot is just my watermark.
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Still looks pretty good, really nice work on the details and colors thus far.
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Nice job, his armor came out well (wow, and great job with the toe claws!).
I know the haiku isn't a main concern in this picture, but thought I should mention a couple errors, just so you know. The term is to "bear witness."
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It's a verb. "to render; afford; give: to bear witness; to bear testimony." "Bear witness" in other words, to see, acknowledge. Something like that.
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Lol.. That's Funny, I just told someone else, "it's a verb" cause she didn't know what the hell *snicker* Ment.
Dammit.
See that's what I get for doing poetry at midnight, eh Leah?
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"Snicker"? Wow
Yeah, try writing an essay at midnight 
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So...what is this raptor thing all about? You seem to be on a dinasour kick...
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Uh.. Well.. I needed to do something that had nothing to do with anything and I was procrastinating.. so I was like to my friend.. "what do you think of Dinosaur samurai?"
And then I Realized the complexity of it.
the dude at the comic book store likes the idea so I'm going with it.
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I say run with it. See how far it goes.
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Hmm, Advanced Critique eh'? I'm not to good with these, However if you want what I have to say, Dinosaurs, usually have two claws as fingers, and the arms are usually bent infront of it, nor are they that long, Not for Raptors which you gave te character the body and look for. The legs should bend back at the knees area to give it more of a Dinosaur look, But as an Anthro, I guess this could work. The black thing on the belt, Is that like a Fur belt, or hip hugger? If so it doesn't match the rest of the picture with the solid outlineing, and kinda clashes with the rest of the picture. From other than those things, I still give the picture and over all 9 out of 10. Just because I like the idea, and the design of the outfit rocks. Velociraptors are my favorite reptile, and my favorite Carnivorous Dinosaur. So Yeah Hope my critique wasn't too harsh @_@, Thats why I'm not so well with them. I do like the work, don't get my wrong. Lol Infact when I figure out how to fave it, I will <3
Love ya!
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"Dinosaurs, usually have two claws as fingers"
Theropods (meat-eating bipedal dinosaurs) usually have three fingers. Ceratosaurs and Abeliosaurids will have a clawless, stubby fourth finger, and Tyrannosaurids had two. Dromaeosaurids had the traditional three.
"Velociraptors are my favorite reptile"
Bird, not reptile. Velociraptor, like most dromaeosaurids, were covered in feathers or down, like birds, and were directly related to modern birds. Velociraptor in particular was found to have winglike primary feathers along its forarm, suggesting it evolved from a flying ancestor and lost its ability to fly.
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Non avian dinosaur, actually.
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Very original charater design. I really like the uniform you made for him.
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