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ImpressHeta — AlphonsexReader- part 1

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Chapter 1-The beginning

You stood there staring at the tombstone of your deceased mother.

Tears ran down your cheeks as all her memories come back to you at once.

You were alone now, nobody was here with you anymore.

Your father was all the way in central and you wonder if he even realized you were gone.

Would he even care?

You just met him anyway, after your mother died she told you to go to him and she gave you a letter for him explaining who you were.

You remember all the things she had told you about your father; he was apparently in central and he was a high ranked state alchemist.

The flame alchemist to be exact.


His name was Roy Mustang, also known as the flame Alchemist.

Your mother told you how she and him dated at one time, she met him one night while she was working as the "lady of the night" as she would say.

How she loved him so, yet when she got pregnant with you she never got a chance to tell him because of the Ishvalin war and Roy had to leave.

Afterwards, the two lost contact with each other and moved on.

On her death bed, your mother begged you to go to him and give him the letter, and so you did.

You left your hometown Resimboll and headed for central. You took the train and arrived shortly, and somehow   managed to find state troopers who escorted you directly to where your so called father was.

When you finally met him, you handed the letter over and tried to explain everything to him to your best ability.


He was in shock for a while and then denial but after reading the letter knew that you were truly his daughter.

You lived with him for a while but nothing ever felt at home to you.

He was always arguing with someone about the military and never had any time for you.

You barely saw him during the day and one day you couldn't take it anymore.


The military was so deep in your life.

You were only eight, you shouldn't be going through such hardships.

So you ran away,  back to the only place you knew.

Resimboll.

You managed to swipe some money from Mustang for the train and you headed home, leaving central far behind you.

When you finally get back to your home, your real home but stopped dead in your tracks as you look at what had become of your home.

Nothing but rubble was left, it had been completely destroyed and all your memories inside it were destroyed along with it.

Not knowing where to go, you went to your mother like how you would always do when you were upset; into your mother's warm arms, but there was no longer warmth of a mother to comfort you.

Only a cold stone was left in her place, which led you to be here now.

Staring at this cold stone that was all that was left of your mothers memory.

The only thing to prove that she ever even existed.

You fell on the ground and press your back against her tombstone.

You cry  into your knees that were covered by your dress.

For a while there was silence, nothing but the sound of loneliness was there to comfort you.

You played with the grass beneath you with your fingertips, but  hear the sound of children approaching.

You look up and see two boys with golden blonde hair, one with brown eyes one with golden eyes, playing, their mother following behind them a ways from you.

How you envied them, their laughter, their joy. You watch as they start to pass by, but they stop and stare at you.

The two boys stared at your (e/c) eyes that were full of tears and your puffy pink nose and flushed cheeks.

You break the gaze and continue to rub your fingers in the grass and dirt.

"Hey brother look at that girl over there. Have you ever seen her around?"Al asks.


"Nope but she seems pretty sad."Edward says.


"Maybe we should go over and ask her what's wrong."Al suggests.


"Or we can let her be and just forget about it."Edward says, bluntly.


"But it's late and getting dark."


"Then if she gets cold or something she'll go home, Al." But Alphonse simply shakes his head and runs over to where you were. You look up and see his big brown eyes focused directly on you.

"Hi."he says kneeling down to you.

"Hi.."you mumble.

"Are you okay?" Al asks. You don't answer and continue to play with the grass beneath your fingertips. "Oh,well it'll be okay."

You put your hands up to your face getting it dirty and start to cry again.

"Hey,don't cry!" he yelps ,trying to comfort you.

Edward runs over with their mom and kneel beside you.

Mrs.Elric pulls out a tissue and hands it to you.

You wipe your face and look at them.

"It's getting late,you should head home to your family."she tells you. 

"I don't have one."you reply quietly.

"What? You don't have one?"Edward .

"Then where do you sleep? Eat? Everything?"Al asks as well.

"Where ever I find.".

"Then you'll come with us."the young boy suggested.

Ed nodded.

"Yeah, it's suppose to rain tonight and you can't stay out here in the rain!"

"Right mom??" the boys chimed in unison, looking up at their mother.

Their mother frowned at you,

"They're right.You can't stay out here."she tells you. 

"But, you don't even know me though. Why would you take me in?"you ask.

Al and Ed looked at each other.

"Your name."Al stated.

"What?"  

"What is your name?" Al asks again. "I'm Alphonse and this is my brother Edward."

You blink a few times before answering,

"I'm _____."you say softly.

"Well then _____, you are coming back with us!" The older brother gleams.

You shake your head. 

"No, thanks for your concern but I don't want to bother anybody else with my existence."

"But-"

You stand slowly but for an unknown reason,  suddenly feel dizzy as well as light-headed find yourself collapsing.  

Edward and Alphonse's yells were the last thing you remember hearing before silence.

"She's going down!"

When you wake again, you were lying in a bed with a cloth on your forehead.

 Sitting up, you  look around the room and get up to walk to the door.

You open it slowly and peek out.

The sound of Edward and Alphonse could be heard from down the hall and you slowly follow their voices.

Peeking around the corner and see said boys along with  Mrs.Elric in the kitchen.

You stood there staring for a moment before you were spotted by Al.

He gleamed.

"_____, you're awake!"

 You hide behind the wall shyly.

Giggling, the boy trots over towards you and peeks his face around the corner as well.

"C'mon, dinner is ready!"

He pulls you into the kitchen and sets you down at the table next to him.

Mrs. Elric sets the food on the able on you all eat.

You eat like you haven't eaten in days, and the young boys just laugh at you.

You grab your glass of milk and turn towards Al.

"Bet I can drink all mine before you can!"you challenge him with a daring smirk.

He smirked back, accepting your challenge.

"You're on!!"

The two of you gulp your milk down and you nearly choke.

The two of you slam your glasses down on the table at the same moment.

"I win!"you cheer.

"No way! I won that one!"Al teased.

"It was a tie."Ed grumbled.

"Why didn't you do the challenge too?"you ask him.

He pushes his glass away.

"I hate milk!"he spat. 

"You should drink it, it's good for you." Mrs.Elric scolds.

"I hate that stuff, it's like drinking vomit."he growled, crossing his arms.

You stand up and put your plate away, before turning back to them and bowing your head.

"Thank you for this but I have to go now."you  tell them. 

"What?"Al and Ed say in unison. "You can't leave." 

"I have to, it's not my place to stay here."you reply.

They grab your arms tightly, pulling on you.

"_____, please stay."

"No, Al I have to go." You tell him but  he gives you the puppy dog face and you blush a little. "Please stop looking at me like that." 

"I will if you stay,pleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeeeeee." Al pleads. Mrs.Elric stands up.

"Al, that's enough._____, I'm sorry but you have to stay with us for tonight at least. It's pouring outside." You look out the window and see the rain pouring from the sky.

You let out a breath.

"Fine. Thank you." One night turned into days and days into  weeks and weeks turned into months. You stayed with Elrics and lived a happy life, the one you wanted, the life you once had.

It finally returned right?
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Comments: 15

YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL [2016-07-09 08:57:00 +0000 UTC]

MAYBE IT DID.
MY LIFE AIN'T OVER YET--

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MsAnimeLoverMsDixon [2016-03-28 22:42:58 +0000 UTC]

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you

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YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL In reply to MsAnimeLoverMsDixon [2016-07-09 08:56:02 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry, I don't wanna get kissed or asked out, or seeing a dead girl in me.
So.. fcuk Clarissa. She can go fcuk herself...

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Discardia2 [2015-08-28 02:53:00 +0000 UTC]

*fangirly noises* OH GOD WHAT HAVE I BECOME

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theotakugurl [2015-04-08 08:12:14 +0000 UTC]

......... I'm scared about what's going to happen next... But I can't wait!

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Jessleia [2014-10-06 21:00:09 +0000 UTC]

IM SO HAPPY. in my mind i was liveing with them any way

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SomeOrdinaryArtists [2013-10-17 20:43:08 +0000 UTC]

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MyArmor [2012-10-31 18:12:13 +0000 UTC]

OH HOW FANTASTIC! This is the first reader insert of Al Elric! And this is lovely too! I'll o read all he chapters....

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ImpressHeta In reply to MyArmor [2012-10-31 21:24:13 +0000 UTC]

wow really!!Thanks a bunches!!im glad you like it!

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bluenightwolf [2012-10-20 05:36:11 +0000 UTC]

This is great! I've never actually seen a fanfiction involving Alphonse! I love that kid!
Anyway I have a suggestion: Whenever someone new speaks, start a whole new paragraph. It will make it a whole lot easier to read! But other than that, it's great! I wonder how this will unfold

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ImpressHeta In reply to bluenightwolf [2012-10-20 15:57:10 +0000 UTC]

ok thanks for the advice im glad you like it so far too! and thanks for the watch!!

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bluenightwolf In reply to ImpressHeta [2012-10-20 21:58:13 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! Keep it up!

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ImpressHeta In reply to bluenightwolf [2012-10-20 23:40:50 +0000 UTC]

i just uploaded part 2 and i think i did it the way u said you wanted.I started a new paragraph everytime somebody else spoke hope its easier for you now

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bluenightwolf In reply to ImpressHeta [2012-10-22 01:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Haha awesome, I'll go check it out

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ImpressHeta In reply to bluenightwolf [2012-10-22 02:00:34 +0000 UTC]

yay^^

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