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Faerie-s [2007-08-19 09:50:29 +0000 UTC]
first of all, I think this s brilliant and fantastic and amazing, secondly, 2 gig?! WTF!! soooo much space! I mean, the 4 days I can understand... but 2 GIG??!! omg *dies* Remember though, merging your layers wont kill you ^^ in fact, is really good and much easier to work with ^^ right, here is my crit ^^:
1. Her hair could do with more tone to it. I also think that it would look really cool if you scrapped the outline of it and drew more strands ^^ remember, even though its blond, some dark brown would be found on the underside of it.
2. This is brobally just me... but the eye needs some more 3d to it... like a white spot that is from where the light hits it.
3. The Shading is good... on a basic level! Crank it up a bit! use really dark contrasting colours! You can get an AMAZING effect with contrast (contrast is what I'm good at so I shall ramble about it XD) contrast is essential for your drawings to come alive. I can see that your style does'nt have much contrast in it to begin with, but I suggest you use one more layer of shading ^^ to give it that boost yoou know? ^^
4. I really like the way you did the gun, but more detail could be really cool ^^ like doing bumps in the metal, changing the texture in places ect.
4. The rocks are good, the detail in them is amazing! but I think you need to blend some of the cracks and stuff more, like taking a 20% opacity brush and making the edges a bit blurier ^^
All in all, for all the crit I've given, I think this is a wonderful peice!!! I applaud you! And I love the way you exadurate feet ^^
I hope I wasn't too harsh
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Faerie-s In reply to ImRazil [2007-08-19 16:53:14 +0000 UTC]
pleasure ^^ I'm glad you find it useful!! I've only just started to see the mistakes in drawings so I'm using it to the best of my ability ^^
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TorturedVictim [2007-08-18 20:32:19 +0000 UTC]
woah. I'm beyond impressed
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Eyenstyn [2007-08-16 18:12:21 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the double post.
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ImRazil In reply to Eyenstyn [2007-08-17 14:51:08 +0000 UTC]
no prob, glad you like it ^^.
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Onixstar1 [2007-08-15 16:00:39 +0000 UTC]
wow. thats amazing =]
I like the way you did the wings, very pretty =] and the gun (tho odd contrast)
She needs a name tho......
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Onixstar1 In reply to ImRazil [2007-08-16 13:06:14 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm. nope no ideas but ill tell you if i have one =]
and cool, hopes you find somthing
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Yukiko993 [2007-08-15 12:05:39 +0000 UTC]
thats pretty!
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DesertxSnow [2007-08-15 09:54:17 +0000 UTC]
.___________________________.
That is the most awesome thing I have seen today... you're also right, the certain part of the gun do remind me of Upgrade.... it works! o0o
But yeah, animes tend to mix lots of ideas together, which either makes it really good, or really weird. This is such a great combination though, and it does work, which makes it even better! I couldn't even do this, so I really have no suggestions on improvement... this is just ultimate proof that with a little bit of dA, encouragement, suggestions, and practice... things in art can be accomplished.
What I just said was so moving. It scares me now. o-o;
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DesertxSnow In reply to ImRazil [2007-08-16 07:12:12 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! IT'S MY JOB. -libra- I'm supposed to do that! But I normally screw it up. 8"C
DA I think is one of the best things to come to artists, along with all those Oekaki boards! 8D But still, you're right we would have been worse off probably. Reason I got into art was because I was kind of jealous of my friend's skills and then went to join dA... I got very far from where I started almost 2 years ago on my ~phantomluver account.
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SilverRaven101 [2007-08-14 23:47:00 +0000 UTC]
Wha! So good! I like it a lot. And I see you added wings...
Blah! That copyright thing is very annoying.
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