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Published: 2011-07-14 19:38:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 336; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 9
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Description Receipt-scrap doodle at work today covering cafe break.

After pulling my second closing shift to six-am turnaround this week, if my boss thought sticking me in the cafe to cover break was going to produce anything but a staring, slack-jawed zombie barista or doodling, he must've bought his crack from Amy Winehouse's dealer.

This is the first rough draft of a new character in development. No name yet, but I know he's something like an incubus, and has a nasty Hellfire smoking habit.
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Comments: 21

ashigaru [2011-07-17 16:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Interesting.

And if the crack is from Amy Winehouse's dealer, you know it's good shit; she's got the money for the best stuff...

Makes me want to take up cigars again... just a little.

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InAbsentia In reply to ashigaru [2011-07-17 18:47:55 +0000 UTC]

Ew, don't! This nutcake here might smoke, but it's a terrible terrible habit, and if you've managed to lose it, best not to go finding it again. Everybody prefers you with lungs, Chuck.

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ashigaru In reply to InAbsentia [2011-07-17 20:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Just a little, as I said. Cravings are just that, cravings. I have already made many promises to *not* smoke, and those will not be broken.

Since both my parents smoked (and both died to smoking-related diseases), I won't be burning any cigars anytime soon.

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InAbsentia In reply to ashigaru [2011-07-17 22:14:34 +0000 UTC]

That's good to hear.

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ashigaru In reply to InAbsentia [2011-07-17 22:34:51 +0000 UTC]

I hope you don't think less of me for my past

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InAbsentia In reply to ashigaru [2011-07-17 22:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Not at all. The pas it the past, no one's not got things they wish they hadn't done, or don't like people to know about.

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ashigaru In reply to InAbsentia [2011-07-17 22:37:43 +0000 UTC]

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Chyrstis [2011-07-17 05:14:06 +0000 UTC]

I love the details you've given him so far. Don't know why, but that nose does suit him rather well...

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InAbsentia In reply to Chyrstis [2011-07-17 18:56:55 +0000 UTC]

You think? That was the first physical feature I was sure of for him, long, narrow nose. Should be sort of unattractive, but by golly, he somehow makes it work.

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TeenTitanRaven17 [2011-07-15 00:22:05 +0000 UTC]

what material do you use to draw that?! it looks so cool!

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InAbsentia In reply to TeenTitanRaven17 [2011-07-15 00:30:33 +0000 UTC]

I used two bic pens (one black, one red) and receipt paper. Then I played with it in Corel Paintshop Pro to make it niftier.

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TeenTitanRaven17 In reply to InAbsentia [2011-07-15 00:41:49 +0000 UTC]

ive got to try that! thanks!

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Emania [2011-07-14 23:35:08 +0000 UTC]

I like the features on him -- like, oddly together -- does that make sense? I also like the way he's looking down, as if he was really "looking down" on someone. What a way to show attitude in just a profile, girlie!

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InAbsentia In reply to Emania [2011-07-14 23:52:34 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks, babydoll! You nailed him pretty well, too. I dunno if he's an incubus, or descended from one, or whatever, but I do know he draws power from sex/desire/love/lust, or whatever, and the girl I'm writing about is one of very, very few people who's immune to his magic... but not necessarily to his bizarre charm and ridiculous hotness. He's not what you would call traditionally handsome--his nose is too long, and a little narrow, and his lips are wide and thin, but his high, angular cheekbones and strong, square jaw pull it all together somehow. They have a tease/friendly/mutual aggravator sort of relationship. He likes to rile her up, and she enjoys deflating his ego. He's going to be fun, I know it.

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Emania In reply to InAbsentia [2011-07-15 02:28:00 +0000 UTC]

That is a pretty cool backstory. (Remind me to talk to you about a set of characters and a situation I had thought up once and never done anything with -- and thought briefly about doing up right for NaNo but never got around to figuring them out...but you could probably help. I could use your knowledge of all things urbanfantasty for this one, I think. And they aren't fanfic! *gasp!*)

The way you describe his charm reminds me a bit of Fimia and her Zeltron-ness. But I like that sort of the side-effect of being an incubus (or descendant) is that he's got this sort of charm that oozes off him, whether he will or nay. (At least, that's sort of what I got from your description, which is why it reminds me of Fims, since if she doesn't work on sort of controlling her Zeltron-ness, she would be attracting all sorts of people...and the fact that people NOTICE her wherever she goes and that guys have this feeling of wanting her when they see her is sort of the leftover that she can't do a thing with.)

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elKoi [2011-07-14 23:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh I think he will look awesome once you develop the whole concept form him! Cause breathing fire is already bad ass

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InAbsentia In reply to elKoi [2011-07-14 23:56:12 +0000 UTC]

Huh, I dunno if he can breathe fire (totally going to have consider that now, though), but it's more that he smokes a certain sort of cigarette of otherworldly tobacco (more like clove cigarettes than tobacco, though) the smoke of which, when exhaled, tends to be a glowy red with sparks in it. He's definitely gonna be a fun one.

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creepella [2011-07-14 20:56:46 +0000 UTC]

I think this is cool.

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InAbsentia In reply to creepella [2011-07-14 20:58:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, haha! Cool is a good adjective.

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a-nameless-one [2011-07-14 20:20:50 +0000 UTC]

This is a bit different than your usual style.

The way you drew the hair in combination with the vapors of his breath creates a very raw and dynamic feel.

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InAbsentia In reply to a-nameless-one [2011-07-14 20:39:33 +0000 UTC]

I was trying something a bit different; I started with the nose, since I actually had that in mind when I started it. It turned out okay, I think,

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