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inanenormality — Arus sitting on a Rock
Published: 2019-04-01 16:36:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 461; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 2
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My OC and Avatar, a repaint from 2005 found here fav.me/dd3jx30critique desired!
e: I'm aware the hair looks really flat due to the darker color being off compared to the rest of the painting, I do plan to fix this.
WIPI changes can be found here
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Hey,first I like the character. She looks super cool. I can see what you're trying to do and all but the legs kinda got me confused at first, so I had to look twice. The shading is nice. And the highlights are really good. But I think u should widen ur choice of color for her clothes. Cause the clothes blends with the rock. The eyes are a bit big and the but the color is spot on. I could relate when it comes body anatomy, and that subject is seriously hard. The shoulders dont really suite with her pose. It kinda looks more like a shrug. The highlights are good but I cant see where exactly is the light source. Her hair is okay, but the bangs are a little uneven. But overalll everything is nice.
Keep doing a good job
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I like the character design and how the outfit matches with the rock. I do agree that the hair looks a little flat and I know you will fix it. I think you should work on the background because I personally think the purple seems out of place in this scene. I think you should add like a nature scene in the background or maybe have the rock sitting by a river to make this piece come together. I think you could also try to bring the characters eyes out more by matching it slightly to the sky or body of water. Overall beautiful piece. You did an especially good job with the shading.
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The remake will be better when it gets finished 
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She's definitely my online pseudonym.
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Buenas, que puedo decir mmm. El personaje me gusta, la composición del trabajo en si es agradable. Los colores están buenos.
Lo que me inquieta son los hombros, hace que la chica este un poco rígida, haciendo que la pose no quede tan natural. Podrías hacer que la cabeza se tire un poco más hacia su mano derecha y doblar un poco más la muñeca de la misma mano, creería que le daría un poco más de naturalidad.
Una cosa más si bien los colores está bien, me parece que está un poco duro que no estoy seguro si es porque los tonos de la sombra son muy oscura o por que le faltaría suavizarlo más al pincel.
Sigue practicando, yo también tengo mil errores en mis trabajos.
Hi, I can say mmm. I like the character, the composition of the work itself is nice. The colors are good. What worries me are the shoulders, it makes the girl a bit stiff, making the pose not so natural. You could make the head pull a little more towards his right hand and bend the wrist a bit more in the same hand, he would think it would give him a little more naturalness. One more thing although the colors are fine, I think it is a bit hard that I am not sure if it is because the shades of the shadow are very dark or because it would be lacking to soften it more to the brush. Keep practicing, I also have a thousand errors in my work.
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i really like the little details in the clothing (belt loops!), and the eye color is entrancing!
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How are you so talented!?My drawings are NOTHING compared to your ones!
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Aw, thank you. I just practiced... a ton. I'm still not like crazy good yet, but hopefully one day.
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Practice?!I cant be that good if I TRIED and you my friend are one talented snowflake!
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