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-READ the whole act from my website ---> bbb-rbook2.atspace.cc/book2vol…
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New act again! Oh my, one more week and the marathon is over!
Is it just me or does time go faster than before?
Haha OK, here we finally have a long waited peek in Gretchen's character. This troubled girl has ended up making bad choises in order to gain her love and refuses to change her ways. Stubborn and desperate, a bad combination...
Mai is not as ill tempered as Gretchen but even she has her limits...
I wouldn't want to see a catfight between them lololol...
Oh my, this was a very battle focused act again. Next time we'll learn what's going on on Earth and how they'll return to Wonder Revolution with new back up!
Enjoy!
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Comments: 42
Finally got around reading this!
Mai was particularly well drawn this chapter. I loved all her close up face shots in the chapter.
Wakiya was really well drawn as well. Now I finally get to find out who this "unrequited love" person in.
I like that although Gretchen is a villain, she isn't completely evil.
Hopefully she will switch sides (like Spectra did)????
I don't think I've mentioned this, but I really like Gretchen's thick eyebrows.
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Oh, thank you so much!
It was particularly fun to color this time, the night shades gave lots of nice opportunities
I'm glad if it stands out!
Hoho, yes he's revealed!
We'll see what happens to them aventually! 
Oh haha, thanks, that's so nice to hear!
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No problem!
Yes, don't even need the colors to tell them apart!
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That's it! Gretchen has now officially become my favorite Hex member!
While I think it is foolish of her to put everything, her belief, her dream, her future into one man, I really admire her love and loyalty and the way she turns it into her own strength Not everyday you can win against THE Harukaze Mai
I knew that sooner or later Edgar and the Queen will be defeated, but I don't want to see Gretchen go down with him
I hope future Acts will reveal more about Gretchen's past and maybe how Edgar really think of her also
Btw, the battle is awesome!
P/S: Momo-chaaaannnn!
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Oooh, how wonderful!
Haha awwh, me too actually...
Gretchen is very naive and foolish in her blind love. Many girls, and boys too, can get lost in the feeling or in this case in the illusion of love they think they can attain -sadly the story often ends up in a heartbrake, even thought the love and determination can give great power in one's usage too.
Haha yeah, Mai is not an easy opponent, but everyone loses sometimes
What is Gretchen's fate is something we'll see in the future
There will be more of their relationships and stuff
Maybe it's another spoiler but in volume 2 I'll focus more on character developement now that all the new characters have been fully introduced and we've gotten to know them a bit. First volume was hectic and fast going, so volume 2 will give a little deeper peek on the matters and on the relationships/interactions too
Oh, thank you! I have to admit this battle was one of the most demanding ones and full of action. It also took a lot longer to finish, I'm glad it's over haha! xD I'm glad the feelings got conveyed too~! ^^
MOMO haha! Pink panda lol!
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Haha yeah, of course Mai is not impossible to defeat
Aww, I'm so looking forward to such plausible ending for Gretchen-chan
OMG, it sounds like volume 2 will be a lot more exciting and interesting
Yeah, even though it's not a final battle of sort, it still has that epic feel!
Maybe it's a custom-made panda
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Haha true true, it wasn't an easy win, Mai is one of the top brawlers after all
Lucky or a cheater haha, but villains need to be little more powerful so that they provide the ordeal the heroes need to overcome
Lets see what I'll end up making! Oh goosh but there will be nasty ends too, just like in the anime, but I'm not sure if I wanna kill so many of my precious characters otl ;_; Killing kazimir was bad enough DX<
It's always easier to "fill the gaps" in the second volume and the plot is easier than in the beginning since it only continues with little twists
Oh shughs...
There will be more, how should I say, rampage battle strategies ahead haha...
Yeah, pink and Momo belong together...
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It's ok. Character death in anime is very normal
Maybe the process is easier, but what's importance is how good your twists are
Oh, that's great to hear!
Momo:
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True, I need to grow a spine, I don't like killing my characters but well, bad things have to happen too
I shall try my best, thank you for the kind words and support!
You're always so inspiring and kind...!
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EPIC BATTLE!
Gotta draw Gretchen and Sandman fighting against my Armorsaur!
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Thank you!
Hoho that so? Awesome!
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You're welcome!
Or, against Ino... I don't really know...
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Oh yesh i knew it was him 
oh these two and their catfight ~ thought am on Mai's side XD but i feel bad for Gretchen that she choise this path just for one person... this is getting so exctiting
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Haha, good guess!
Lol haha, true true!
Yes, it's her ordeal to overcome! I'm glad you're liking it this far!
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Oh no problem xD it's amazing !
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Oh my... I really start to like Gretchen!! 
I was really excited about this act. Couldn't wait to see Mai and Gretchen fighting!^^ No worry, you didn't dissapoint me at all
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Haha, that's great!
Awwwh, I'm so happy to hear that! Thank you!
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Oh no mai chan lost to Gretchen and great act Ine chan. its awsome.
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Harsh...
The girl is in love, people in love aren't always reasonable...
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him use her and no one but the me, night and mai care!
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... I'm not really following you with this...
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I'm sorry, there seems to be some disconnections on the server again. Here's another link: ine16.atspace.cc/cover16nv.htm…
I hope it works now!
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Thanks got it too work after refreshing my computer like 4 times.
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