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My-Magic-Dream [2017-10-21 22:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Im so happy to see you are still doing studies! It making you into a much better artista I see and you have such a cool style coming through as well! Very bright and glowy!   Very pretty! I will critizie though cause I wan t you to grow as an artista (please forgive me) I drew out the refrence picture you added here and compered my drawingto your to see how off you were….The proporcions are kinda off unfortunally. The first mistake you did was making the canvas size for this to square so It would be hard to messure it right. You made her head way to for her body size. A good a good way to messure how mig the sholders is taking the width of the head and doubling them t osee how long the sholders are. The sholders I think should be slanted downwards and lower down a little more than they are here (she looks a liitle stiff here)

Also you lowered all her facial features a little. The eyes should always be at the center of the head (I mean where the scalp till the chin).

The shape of the lips and eyes are wrong as well. The top lid of he eyes look to staright in comparison to the picture. They look rounded and the outer part of the eye look like its going more down than the copy. And the lip size look way tos mall in comparison to the picture (I understand why you did that cause she has a gradient lip stick going on her her lips are actually a little bigger than that)

 In my opinión you still have work to do on how you do porportions at the moment (sorry to say that ; ) It is hard though and Im also working on it as well. If I can send you a picture of what I did to help you out I will try and send it to you some how.

I will say though! You got the color matching pretty dam spot on. Like its insane how you got the exact color of her skin! Your colouring looks lovely. I see you love very bright glowing colours and thats great but I think you abuse of it a little bit and you dont notice the glow so much because teres so much of it. If you wanted the glowing effect to stand out more I will say that I advice you start of colouring the drawing in more greyish tones and add the colour (with the luminocity or Lumi and shade effect) until the end and give it 2 to 3 hints of it on the edges of the shadows and when the light its behind something like hair or ears and nose. (like you can see the light going through skin and you can see all the vains lmao)

Im sorry If I was to harsh but I actually do believe you have tons of potential! You doing so many great pieces I hope you can take something from what I said and I hope t osee you grow as an artist c: GOOD LUCK OUT THERE!! YOU ARE DOING A BEAUTIFUL JOB!

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