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Published: 2012-08-12 21:49:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 456; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 4
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Took me five hours x.xThis is the only background I made that I like.
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Hi~ I decided to critique your work. I hope you don't mind. c:
First off, the good things I'm seeing.
I love the background. I sometimes have a hard time coming up with background ideas, but this one is fairly simple, yet satisfying to stare at. Good job on that!
I only have two critiques on this, and it deals with Marshall.
1.) His hands seemed unfinished. :c I know it's a small thing, but it does add to a picture when it doesn't seem like the artist got lazy. I do the same thing too.
2.) His neck seems almost too long. It's not a huge deal. :c Maybe bringing it down slightly would be a good idea.
Overall, good job! <3
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Thanks a lot of the feedback ^^
I was thinking about those things after I finished them
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Glad to help. c: I hope it helps at all.
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Dude, that is fantastic! I'm really impressed.
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Thank you, that means a lot coming from you.
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lol I do too x3
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He is an example of a hot vampire
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