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Here is page nine of Chapter 1.

The bottom of Charlie's mouth is shaded in the bottom panel to give it more of a focus on him. He's not very open with his feelings so I was trying to emphasize his reply.

I do not own this story. It is originally by Stephenie Meyer. I only draw the artwork.
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lorraine-kristine [2007-08-02 12:12:32 +0000 UTC]

It's like..her dad is sad..or something..
When saying "you're welcome."

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InnerSakura16 In reply to lorraine-kristine [2007-08-02 15:13:04 +0000 UTC]

He's not really sad. he's just uncomfortable in situations like these.

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lorraine-kristine In reply to InnerSakura16 [2007-08-02 15:20:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh..okay. I can understand that.

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FragileReveries [2007-08-02 09:59:43 +0000 UTC]

Eeeee.
I really like the expressions on their face.
well done.

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InnerSakura16 In reply to FragileReveries [2007-08-02 15:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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hikariyuushi [2007-08-01 19:43:55 +0000 UTC]

WOO HOO! She's back from her two day break! ^_^

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InnerSakura16 In reply to hikariyuushi [2007-08-02 02:08:34 +0000 UTC]

lol. Yup! I'm back! Watch out everyone!

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hikariyuushi In reply to InnerSakura16 [2007-08-02 04:21:58 +0000 UTC]

lol ^_^

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Mattissimo [2007-08-01 18:45:07 +0000 UTC]

really good focus on facial expression and mouth movements,
i especially like the lower right panel. the girl (whats her name again?) looks conflicted.

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InnerSakura16 In reply to Mattissimo [2007-08-02 02:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Someone notices their different mouth movements! Yay! Her names Bella by the way.

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B6L6U6E [2007-08-01 17:01:40 +0000 UTC]

I really like your art style. Keep up the good work!

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InnerSakura16 In reply to B6L6U6E [2007-08-02 02:07:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Do you really think I have a unique style?

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B6L6U6E In reply to InnerSakura16 [2007-08-02 16:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Most people always try to do the shojo thing. But yours is mixed w/ realism and anime. I like it alot, and can't wait to see what Edward looks like. TEEHEE!

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InnerSakura16 In reply to B6L6U6E [2007-08-02 17:04:26 +0000 UTC]

lol. Thanks! That's what everyone's waiting for, is Edward.

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Etxe-berri [2007-08-01 14:06:58 +0000 UTC]

hi! so u use her story...nice idea...

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InnerSakura16 In reply to Etxe-berri [2007-08-02 02:06:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Thanks.

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