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insanechild182 — you fucked up my life....
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Published: 2004-12-07 19:09:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 14
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I hate all those times we spent togetherThey were all fucking lies
You were always on my mind
But now you fucked up my life….
I walk outside and try to clear my mind
Every place reminds me of you
Reminds me of those fake smiles you gave me
Reminds me how that night you fucked up my life….
All those sad songs on the radio reminds me of you
Reminds me of a sensitive girl who gave out her heart
Getting nothing back but lies
You fucked up my life…..
We would stay up all night looking at each other’s eyes
We promised each other our love ‘till the end and beyond
Why can’t I escape from all this thoughts?
You fucked up my life…..
I can’t forgive
I can’t forget, can’t give in
What went wrong?
You fucked up my life…..
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Comments: 8
The repetition of the phrase at the end of each stanza really makes the poem all the more powerful XD I love this part -
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All those sad songs on the radio reminds me of you
Reminds me of a sensitive girl who gave out her heart
Getting nothing back but lies
"
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I can’t forgive
I can’t forget, can’t give in
What went wrong?
You fucked up my life…..
crazy, i adore it, esp. that part.
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I like it...one thing i really liked it how you repeated the key line...that really made it sink in and feel it.
i don't know why you said it was bad..its really not.
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aww,thank you so much...i really didnt think someone would like it.thanks, means a lot !!!
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