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InTheSchemeOfThings — My Immortal: Rewritten Ch:4 [NSFW]

Published: 2010-11-25 03:49:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 518; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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((Rewriter's Note: WOW. THIS CHAPTER. Ugh. Okay, this was rather graphic for me. I didn't enjoy writing this at all! [Seriously.] ….[sort of.] This chapter turned out kinda short, but I love how it ends, so I didn't want to group it in with another chapter. Cliffhangers ftw! Soo, readers beware, it gets [sorta] sexually graphic at the end. You have been warned. It could have been more so, but I didn't want to go that far. Hahaha. xD ))


Author's Note: I said stop flaming! Ebony's name is EBONY not Mary Sue, okay! Draco is so in love with her, and that's why he may be acting a little out of character! And they have known each other for a while, having gone to school together for 7 years. Okay?! It's not strange!


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       "Draco!" I shouted, my heart pounding in my chest. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?"

Malfoy didn't answer, but he brought the flying car to a stop. It lowered gently, and he stepped out of it. I followed him, my curiosity growing.

"What the fucking hell? Draco, why won't you answer me?!" I yelled, my temper rising. "Don't ignore me!"

His voice spoke out meekly and I could hardly hear it. "Ebony?"

"What?" I snapped.

The pale boy leaned in close to me, our foreheads touching. I felt my anger melt away immediately. His eyes, dressed up in red colored contacts, were searching my eyes, as if he was trying to silently contact my soul. I could sense such pain and sorrow in them. I was overwhelmed by his gothic presence. I lifted my pale, bony fingers to his soft, warm cheeks.

And then…Draco began to kiss me passionately. So many thoughts were going through my head, but only one mattered: I love you Draco. We moved slightly, until my back hit a tree. Using the tree as support, I let mind my go blank, and the only thing that mattered was Draco. Pressing his hands all over my body, Draco continued to kiss me. My hands ruffled through his hair as our tongues connected.

Grabbing my shoulders gently, he lifted my body off the tree and onto the forest floor. My heart pounding in my throat, I slid my hand down to his pants and unbuttoned them.  As I pulled his pants down, he hastily threw his shirt over his head. I blushed as I surveyed his body. It was perfect. It was everything I had dreamed it would be.

Now, it was my turn. I slowly removed my mini dress, and Draco's thin fingers began to unhook my black satin bra. His hands were trembling, and it was obvious he was unable to do it. I chuckled softly, and placed my hands on top of his. Together, our hands touching, we removed my bra. Draco placed his hands against my plush breasts.

I wanted him badly. He wanted me. It was time. He took me right there, on the hard, cold, dirty forest floor. We had sex for the first time, and it was amazing. Our bodies connected with all the passion our souls held inside. A deep, tingling warmth took over my entire pale body. I was beginning to orgasm. "DRACO!" I cried out. He grunted in reply. And then…a harsh voice tore apart our ecstasy.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING, YOU  MOTHERFUCKERS!"

It was…Dumbledore!
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Comments: 14

DarkAkito [2011-11-19 19:32:24 +0000 UTC]

Woah.

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Felix-BLACK [2010-11-28 06:01:44 +0000 UTC]

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InTheSchemeOfThings In reply to Felix-BLACK [2010-11-28 22:28:45 +0000 UTC]

<3

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evillion21 [2010-11-27 04:29:10 +0000 UTC]

LMFAO.

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InTheSchemeOfThings In reply to evillion21 [2010-11-27 05:18:04 +0000 UTC]

DA SEX IS JUST SO GOFFIK

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Puffalo10 [2010-11-26 19:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes. because dumbledore would tottaly say something like that... hed just prrobably look at you, and be like "Carry on." And walk away. Im not hating. its just my messed up opinion.

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InTheSchemeOfThings In reply to Puffalo10 [2010-11-27 00:54:42 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you completely. That would be so funny to see. >_<

And I love your avatar. AVPM and AVPS ftw!

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Puffalo10 In reply to InTheSchemeOfThings [2010-11-28 04:51:24 +0000 UTC]

YES!!!

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InTheSchemeOfThings In reply to Puffalo10 [2010-11-28 22:30:20 +0000 UTC]

I'ma go to Pigfarts.

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Puffalo10 In reply to InTheSchemeOfThings [2010-12-03 05:39:36 +0000 UTC]

awesome. did you buy out nasa when your parents died?

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InTheSchemeOfThings In reply to Puffalo10 [2010-12-07 05:32:33 +0000 UTC]

Of course I didn't.

I had to make a deal with Voldemort for Hermione Granger.

AND A ROCKETSHIP!!

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Puffalo10 In reply to InTheSchemeOfThings [2010-12-10 01:07:49 +0000 UTC]

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Felix-BLACK [2010-11-25 06:12:36 +0000 UTC]

BOOBIES!

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InTheSchemeOfThings In reply to Felix-BLACK [2010-11-25 06:21:34 +0000 UTC]

Dey R gpffik bobs.

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