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Intrinsica — Forever, My Love...
Published: 2007-05-27 13:15:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description And in the night, when you thought you were all alone,
I will come to you, and sing to you sweet lullabies
And I will send to you the sweetest dreams,
So that you may smile when you wake...
So that your pretty face will never know
How it feels to frown...

I wish......

I would wish for the night to never end
I would wish for you heart to never
Stop its steady beating in my ear
I would wish for time to go on -
On and on, forever while the world turned,
So that I could stay there -
Safe and warm in your arms -
At peace while the world turned.

Safety, warmth, lovers never apart.
I would hold your hand forever
I would hold your heart forever -

Forever......

Forever, my love...
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Comments: 13

briana88 [2007-07-30 01:01:20 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful. your work is so good because almost everyone can relate to it when they read it. it is as if i am reading my thoughts only they are in a melodious form that sounds almost like a song. very good

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Intrinsica In reply to briana88 [2007-07-30 01:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Spoilt rotten, that's me. You're a darlin' for saying so

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littlemissangel [2007-07-03 05:55:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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Intrinsica In reply to littlemissangel [2007-07-03 09:35:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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littlemissangel In reply to Intrinsica [2007-07-04 05:04:01 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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Jadexgirl [2007-06-02 11:51:11 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.
The best peice i've read in awhile.

I just want to jump into the poem and stay there forever.

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Intrinsica In reply to Jadexgirl [2007-06-02 12:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much - what I like best about this peice is that it could be about absolutely anybody, it isn't limited to just a guy..it could be about a girl too...

And if you're feeling down I would sing to you too, of sweet dreams, butterflies, and the stars in your eyes...

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nopickup [2007-05-30 02:56:49 +0000 UTC]

the desire of the persona was well laid-out in the poem..

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Intrinsica In reply to nopickup [2007-05-30 05:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear...I'm going transparent again Does my desire really show through so easily? *blush*

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nopickup In reply to Intrinsica [2007-05-30 12:33:47 +0000 UTC]

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LightIsTheMuse [2007-05-28 00:55:30 +0000 UTC]

It's a very beautiful poem. All the lines flow really well - it almost reads like lyrics and I think it would make a great song. Love is the only thing that can't be bought and no matter what other great things we have in our lives, without love there always seems to be a void. I'm sorry that you're feeling lonely, I know how much that sucks

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Intrinsica In reply to LightIsTheMuse [2007-05-28 02:47:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...now that it's morning for me, I feel so much better..when the sun peeks through the palm fronds and lays his rays of light on my sleeping face, I always have to smile

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LightIsTheMuse In reply to Intrinsica [2007-05-31 23:24:28 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I'm happy to hear you're feeling better. And I know what you mean - it's difficult to be sad when the sun is shining on you; surrounding you with its beauty and radiance.

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