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Intrinsica — Just Like You
Published: 2011-03-25 16:13:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 47; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description I guess I've been looking for
something I thought I'd never find.
I've longed for intimacy,
for someone who'll be my lover,
and who'll be my friend too.

Someone who wants me for me,
who needs me because I need them.
Someone to give me the tenderness,
I've been craving, someone who I
can give my everything to.

Someone who doesn't care how
embarassing and annoying
I can be, all the time.
Someone who'll dance with me,
no matter where we are.

Someone almost exactly like me,
someone just like you.
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Comments: 6

RockerByBaby [2011-03-27 20:21:18 +0000 UTC]

You owned a valuable theme of contrast in this piece, especially a hit to the heart in the end. I like this most because it's what most desire in some form, yet you gently placed your own tone to the piece.

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Intrinsica In reply to RockerByBaby [2011-03-28 01:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
I suspect more of the same kind of thing will be appearing on your screen sometime soon
Thank you for the kind words.

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RockerByBaby In reply to Intrinsica [2011-03-28 03:14:36 +0000 UTC]

You know it.
My pleasure good friend.

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Intrinsica In reply to RockerByBaby [2011-03-28 05:18:31 +0000 UTC]

as always, you are wonderful

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meeden [2011-03-27 00:38:05 +0000 UTC]

sweet in wondering - does love not dream? does it dream alone? ending 2 lines of someone resounding like a question

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Intrinsica In reply to meeden [2011-03-27 01:44:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment

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