RedChevelle [2007-08-02 01:03:27 +0000 UTC]

Hey, another poet! Hooray! I do beleive this is pretty cool, it kind of reminds me of first (Only) Love. Not a bad thing, though, it's always good to get a feel for that little bit of fire in you. After all, what's life without zest? Life's too short to waste on sadness and regret. We obivously got put down here to enjoy the happiness that can only come with a little pain.

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sexc-blonde-angel [2007-08-01 15:25:01 +0000 UTC]

omg omg omg! sooooo true!!!

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Shadow-Of-A-Whisper [2007-08-01 00:01:54 +0000 UTC]

"There are some lessons
It takes us a lifetime
To never learn."
This piece is terrific, once again you amaze me

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LordAzrael85 [2007-07-31 01:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, and these lessons sometimes seem so simple later on, when you're still pondering their meanings..

Good work! That sense of hope can seem so beautiful when you truly feel like you can hold onto it.

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ghbatt [2007-07-30 05:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Good job here, I think you did a great job in getting the emotions across to the reader. The facts you stated are true, and the contrast they have with the conclusion is very well done, as contrast creates emphasis.

Bravo!

-gh

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meeden [2007-07-29 20:03:49 +0000 UTC]

that glimmer of hope is always there if only we can truly find it ourselves. well written - take care

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blue-strawberry [2007-07-29 18:28:35 +0000 UTC]

oh how I understand this! And I inspired it even better
Keep smiling

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silentshadeofGRAY1 [2007-07-29 14:40:12 +0000 UTC]

its funny when it comes to that stuff, no one ever gives up...no matter how bad the last one was..

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