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Published: 2014-09-09 11:03:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 586; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Your kiss is like a fire in my blood,
burning through my veins,
raising my heart rate exponentially.

Waiting to see you every day feels
like a lifetime prison sentence,
on the death row of your love.

You're poetry in motion,
every move you make is like
my favourite song played on repeat.

Your perfection is gorgeous to behold,
a fantastic reminder that when you
look at me, you see what I see looking at you.

Your scent intoxicate me,
tingling through my senses,
blurring my inhibitions.

An addiction of nerdy proportions,
a relaxation of all my stresses,
a calming of my worst fears.

You make me feel alive,
a vitality of dreams,
the best thing that ever happened to me.
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Comments: 3

RockerByBaby [2014-11-07 01:36:06 +0000 UTC]

First three stanzas especially, rock on! You successfully projected this cozy rise of blood pressure and rosy cheeks of a memorable buzz.

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Lincava [2014-10-15 17:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Trin,
I sent a separate note.  It is good to see you happy.  
In this, you express that "trip over one's own two feet" feeling that often happens when we stumble into a relationship that fits so well - and how awkward we can make ourselves feel when we are in that upside-down, heels over head, situation.  It's with the knowledge that this feels so RIGHT.  We start to see deeper, release tentative feelings and open up, as if to fly forward.  These are qualities that are hard to pin down in words.  This write brings them right into my own heart, and reminds me of the truth - the first turning point in a relationship, when we know and admit to how and what we feel.

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meeden [2014-09-09 21:18:07 +0000 UTC]

sounds like you are in love

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