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Published: 2007-07-01 01:23:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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Description I thought you should
know that today,
I stopped loving you.

It's nothing you did,
It's nothing you said -
It's just a secret
I can no longer keep.

I thought you were
Wonderful, witty,
Charming, cute, amazing
And oh, you wanted me
As much as I wanted you.

Somehow though I couldn't
Help but see through
THe person you really are
And onto the surface.

Much to my disgust
It's really all about
Someone else.

Because once -not
That long ago really -
Somebody broke my heart...
And the somebody I can't
Help but compare you to -
He picked up the peices.

He showed me more love
More care and more tenderness
Than perhaps he would have,
Could have, should have shown
To a nobody like me.

That's why I'm here
Trying to tell you now
That I can't love you anymore.

I like you.
I truly thought that
I could love you -
Because you're exactly
What I thought I was
Looking for.

But a heart is unknowable
Until it makes it's choice.

I don't want to lose you -
That hurts me too -
Perhaps more than it should.

But this I need you to know -
One day -
Today, tomorrow,
The next day...
Someday, too soon for you
It will be over between us.

So keep in your mind that
Our kisses - our touches -
This time that we share -
It is limited.

No longer Precious -
Limited...
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Comments: 18

PlasticScream [2007-07-06 17:56:44 +0000 UTC]

Lovely piece.

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Intrinsica In reply to PlasticScream [2007-07-07 03:34:45 +0000 UTC]

Ty

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PlasticScream In reply to Intrinsica [2007-07-07 22:49:29 +0000 UTC]

yw.

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seeminglymeaningless [2007-07-05 03:48:24 +0000 UTC]

very nice

loved the last part!

(mistake ....... it says "ou" instead of you)

otherwise, definate fav!

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Intrinsica In reply to seeminglymeaningless [2007-07-05 04:11:14 +0000 UTC]

Noted, and fixed..thanks hun

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Black-Roses-Fall [2007-07-03 06:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Love is fought for, won, then, if you're weak enough, lost or discarded.

But sometimes, just sometimes, it's held onto. Remembered.

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Intrinsica In reply to Black-Roses-Fall [2007-07-03 09:43:35 +0000 UTC]

I don't think I could hold on much tighter...

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Winsome1 [2007-07-03 03:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Well-said!

Wouldn't it be nice if love was always this "objective" ? Love the way you said this.

W1~

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Intrinsica In reply to Winsome1 [2007-07-03 09:33:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ! Nice to see you

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littlemissangel [2007-07-02 03:15:06 +0000 UTC]

very well written beautiful piece

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Intrinsica In reply to littlemissangel [2007-07-02 13:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It helped me clear my head, and make some decisions I'd been putting off making

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littlemissangel In reply to Intrinsica [2007-07-04 05:30:23 +0000 UTC]

i know that feeling good for you

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Effamay [2007-07-01 09:42:06 +0000 UTC]

...
I kinda know this feeling...
Very, very well written.

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Intrinsica In reply to Effamay [2007-07-01 09:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the support

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Effamay In reply to Intrinsica [2007-07-01 09:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Never is it a problem

I hope all goes well for you

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obsidian-nightfire [2007-07-01 03:45:28 +0000 UTC]

i know that feeling.

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Intrinsica In reply to obsidian-nightfire [2007-07-01 09:40:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hun - love the new sig too

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obsidian-nightfire In reply to Intrinsica [2007-07-01 14:46:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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