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InvaderShkillz — D. VS Shkillz writen entry [NSFW]
Published: 2011-05-08 03:39:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 221; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description      Firing inferno everywhere, as she screamed for it to end. The over whelming heat making her sweet. She screamed as she saw a city in the background of one of her windows. As the ship hit the ground, the window smashed open, leaving shards of glass everywhere and throwing the pilot out of the window.

     She landed far away from where the ship had crashed. Her eye's slowly started to bat open as she moaned in pain. A pain of glass was in her face, near her right upper symbol on her head. She realized where she was and soon knew she had to get up. She brushed off herself and soon felt a warn liquid flowing from her head. She placed her hand on the wound…

     It was blood….

   Yet it was a dark green. She wiped it on her black dress and started then to analyze the quagmire she was in. She smelt smoked and then heard a large BOOM. As her lekku went to the front of her face from the blast, her eyes widen from the sound of the explosion of her ship. She sighed.

   "Well I guess I'm not getting back on that piece of shit." She said out loud to herself then realizing something else .'My opponent must of heard my ship crash and explode. DAMN, already lost the opportunity of surprise and now with the wound it's gonna be harder. DAMN DAMN DAMN!!! ' She thought hard as she did notice her opponent  on top of a hill a 30 yards away from where Shkillz was.

    D. a irken solider, frillier with the irken art of combated, laid on her belly, trying to blend in with the tall grass."Ahh this will be simple, she's hurt and judging on her crash she must not be trained well anoth to even be able to handle a simple peace of our technology hahahah this will be a snap" a smug grimes crept over her alien lips as she got up, picking up her Vortian fighting stick.

   Shkillz started to walk, having no idea where here opponent could possibly be. She looked down on the ground, folding her arms behind her back .In deep thought about why she was even here. She thought long and hard. She then was falling as she felt something hit her legs making her trip. She looked up to see what had tripped her.

   There stood D. Her purple eye slightly narrowed at the blacked eyed irken.. She put her foot on Shkillz exposed back. She somewhat smirked, thinking this was to easy. Then all of a sudden four pak legs came out  and helped the black eyed irken to her feet.


    D stood there in shock, mostly just amazed at the height of the irken, she was around four to 6 inches taller than her. She stood like stone as the blacked one started to turn near her. Her face soon faced D's.

   Shkillz expressions on her face with in both disgust, rage and disbelief. D stood there like stone as the Shkillz came almost chest to chest with her. D gazed into her eye's, feeling like she was being over whelmed with sickness. All she could see was sorrow, pain and hatred in those eyes. She wanted to hug her, if she wasn't her opponent.

   Then she was thrown to her back and had four pak legs pining her to the grass. She tried to squirm out of the hold her ornate had on her, but it was futile. Two of legs perused throw her hands. She screamed in pain and misery, know this may as well be the end.

   Shkillz looked down at D. "My dear, please stop your only gonna make this hurt more for me…" she said softly yet harsh at the same time.

   D looked at her in disbelief. "MORE PAIN FOR YOU? HOW IS THIS MORE PAIN FOR YOU. I'M THE FUCKING ONE HAVING HER HANDS INPALED. BLOODY HELL HOW COULD YOU BE SOO STUPID AT TO SAY THAT???" D screamed at Shkillz with rage. She ran out of breath soon and started to pant wildly

   D started to scream again, not from angrer,but pain. Shkillz remaining pak legs speared her feet, making a crunching noise as she did soo. "My pain is much more horrid then what your feeling my friend. Emotions are much more painful then what your brain and body is feeling now. The stupidly of the world will be more painful then what you're going to feel now. Knowing you're going to be alone forever……That is the most painful thing imaginable." Tears rolled down her face as she lifted up her opponent for what was going to be her last move.

   "You're crazy…" D. said with a scared tone in her voice.

   With one eye half lid and the other open she analyzing what D had said. A grin the came over he lips. All of a sudden her pak legs ripped of the limps the where attached too. Blood pour everywhere as D. limbless body lay on the ground, still pouring out the green blood.

   "And you're dead…" Shkillz grin widened as she walked past the body and made her way to the city….
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Comments: 4

rainbows-and-blood [2011-05-11 22:41:02 +0000 UTC]

fucking unreal story
awesome work

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Cynderbark [2011-05-08 11:09:44 +0000 UTC]

lol well very interesting story. I like it Just come up right away and go strait for the kill! There were less spelling errors than I expected but there are still a lot!
sweet should be sweat
combated should be combat
grimes should be grin
etc.
XDDD aside from spelling mistakes and grammar it's great.

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InvaderShkillz In reply to Cynderbark [2011-05-08 12:33:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks hahaha i know I DO GRAMMER GOOD HAHAH XD

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Cynderbark In reply to InvaderShkillz [2011-05-08 12:54:31 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome XD lol

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