rainbows-and-blood [2011-05-11 22:41:02 +0000 UTC]
fucking unreal story awesome work
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Cynderbark [2011-05-08 11:09:44 +0000 UTC]
lol well very interesting story. I like it Just come up right away and go strait for the kill! There were less spelling errors than I expected but there are still a lot! sweet should be sweatcombated should be combatgrimes should be grinetc.XDDD aside from spelling mistakes and grammar it's great.
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InvaderShkillz In reply to Cynderbark [2011-05-08 12:33:54 +0000 UTC]
thanks hahaha i know I DO GRAMMER GOOD HAHAH XD
Cynderbark In reply to InvaderShkillz [2011-05-08 12:54:31 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome XD lol