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Autumpool [2010-12-31 01:41:01 +0000 UTC]

Looks awesome
This looks amazing I'm SO excited for page 6 & 7~ When do you plan for them to come out?

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Hoeru-Okami [2010-12-31 01:31:58 +0000 UTC]

I remember seeing this page before... o.0 I still like it though! xD



Crit:

Pros:
The shading is wonderful!

The anattomy you are getting pretty good at!

I like how you do the fur detail; not to much to distract you, but enough for you to see it.

I really like how you did the ghost! :3


Cons:
Lol, not rly a con but it looks like their smiling when they see the blood in the first pannel! xD

The leg in the 6th pannel is a little too fat...

The paws are a little too small, as if they have been sqished (in the 4th, 5th, and 6th pannels).

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Denece-the-sylcoe [2010-11-10 01:01:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm onsay th the paws looks a little too small. I love all the details and desines! I envy your cat abilities.

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FadedChicken [2010-09-09 21:49:16 +0000 UTC]

Hiya .3. this is my first critique so..... it might not be that great.

~Pros~
The anatomy is GREAT ^^
The shading is also excellent especially in 5.
The blood in 5 and 6 looks so realistic.

~Cons~
The tail in the first panel, on the tabby looks kinda.... curvy?
In the 5th and 6th panel you can see the blood would have been right at the opening of the 'T' but in the 4th panel, where the tabby looks suprised, you cant see the blood. Sorry if that makes no sense xD
The blood on the wall in panel 2 looks kinda flat, if that makes sense. It looks as if it is facing the reader.

Well, sorry if it doesn't help much but like i said, this is my first critique.

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Ametarsu [2010-08-08 13:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Yeah finally

The cats shading fit well with the background, there are many details, it's treated, its well worth the wait I like your cat's style
Also, the blood is well done ^^

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roseisland [2010-08-04 20:51:43 +0000 UTC]

coolio.

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neatnete [2010-07-24 09:10:17 +0000 UTC]

hazard's neck looks really fat in the 6th panel. otherwise its the best, i love your comic! ^^

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roseisland [2010-07-15 00:19:03 +0000 UTC]

omg I love how you draw! I can't wait for de nezxt page!

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Jayflop [2010-07-11 17:37:46 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome! Great work~

Coppers spirit?

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Tishira [2010-07-10 15:11:02 +0000 UTC]

is that storm? (the one with purple eyes) + great work

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amadeaux [2010-07-10 02:21:09 +0000 UTC]

How do you make the bricks so rough-looking? <3 Love it

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shippofan12 [2010-07-09 00:43:23 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!! just awesome!!! ^^

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DyaniAnn [2010-07-08 21:27:56 +0000 UTC]

haha i love this comic!

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Spottedpool97 [2010-07-08 18:34:19 +0000 UTC]

o3o sadness!

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TheColdHearted [2010-07-08 17:25:43 +0000 UTC]

I jut love the cat with the red cheeks.
the intensity of his,her, can't tell which, stare is so...
smexy. XD

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GingerFlight [2010-07-08 15:05:41 +0000 UTC]

It's a new page!! Boo yah!

So much detail! It's amazing! And I like the poses that the brown tabby cat is in. I forgot her name... but anyway, she looks awesome.

Oooh, it's a ghost kitty! Is it Copper returning from the beyond to tell them where his body lays??? Or is it some other ghost cat that we have yet to learn about? 030

Awesome page, as usual! Came out much faster than usual. I can't wait for the next one!

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messo50 [2010-07-08 13:08:00 +0000 UTC]

since I can't critique in the critique boxy thing,
second to last panel: fat leg is fat

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Nyctra [2010-07-08 04:52:14 +0000 UTC]

There be a ghooosttt~~

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Ko0nafish [2010-07-08 03:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it looks amazing.... <3

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